So i thought of posting my fan-fic up here then decided i'd rather get some criticism for my more serious work.
After spending some time on these forums i've come to the conclusion that NG writing forum is an awful place to copy and paste your work onto. The colours alone make it diffecult to read and don't get me started on the punctuation bug.
I've read the forum rules, i'm posting a link to my blog. It's much easier on the eyes.
Here is the blurb for Lamp Lighters, if you wish to read on, please click here.
"It was five days before anyone knew what was happening. On the sixth day more than half of the countryâEUTMs population were completely wiped out. Before the week was out, no human above the age of 20 stood alive. The sheer shock that erupted from those few days brought chaos and outcry to a world on the brink of peace. We all watched, helpless, as our society disintegrated into nothing. Desolation and ruin replaced families and homes. The sobs of children drowned the nights, months after, and after the sobs came the silence of survivors. What is the first thing a child would do in a situation like this? When the bodies of your ancestors lay waste in the streets, in the shops, in our homes? In the weeks coming to pass, children began to starve and die. Then sure enough they began to fight and survive as their fathers would have. My name is Ellet Wilson and I am 18 years old. I will assure our survival."