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JayBezzy
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Animation Feed Back please Feb. 10th, 2013 @ 11:00 PM Reply

So im teaching myself how to animate and this is literally like the 15th thing i've animated so far. So if you have any critiques on what i could improve or any inconsistencies in the animation fell free to let me know, thanks alot !

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/962dd4b84f217352ab7fae2d 69255e74

KaDoYuu
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Response to Animation Feed Back please Feb. 10th, 2013 @ 11:08 PM Reply

At 2/10/13 11:00 PM, JayBezzy wrote: So im teaching myself how to animate and this is literally like the 15th thing i've animated so far. So if you have any critiques on what i could improve or any inconsistencies in the animation fell free to let me know, thanks alot !

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/962dd4b84f217352ab7fae2d 69255e74

Keep track of the cuffs and collar sizes. Other than that, I find a wonderful bit of practice, here.


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Response to Animation Feed Back please Feb. 11th, 2013 @ 05:20 AM Reply

This is looking pretty good so far!
The only thing that's truly bugging me is when the character goes off model.

here we have a starting arm size
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/15d925f9b9939a19c6f87cb5 a2c78e7d

then it goes much longer and awkward when the hand touches the face

you can fix this by moving the upper arm up a bit more and shortening the forearm.

Just slap some good inbetweens in there and it should look good. Post an update when you do more with it :)

Animation Feed Back please