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A Time Before Time

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Maltos
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A Time Before Time 2013-02-09 03:15:59 Reply

Look at it in all its glory
would'nt it make a good story
though I've written it many times
It seems as if i can not ryme
nor pick up the pace and bluff
because in my mine there is too much stuff

A story i know and love
one you've never heard of
i've written some
not enough makes me feel like a bum
i hope one day it will be done
but lets face it I'm no fun


An Eye For An Eye Will Make The World Blind.......right?

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Response to A Time Before Time 2013-02-09 12:34:08 Reply

I like it.


good luck.