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Game Story! Big alien fps shooter 2013-02-03 17:39:48 Reply

Hello my name is Christian
I work at the NSS (National Security System US)
Bengolarrea is a island in the middle of the black sea, we lost contact to the island 2 weeks ago, it has been a black spot on the radar during the contact break, nothing that arrived to the island came back, until now, and the spot just came back on the radar like nothing have happen, but when we arrived to the island, the island was dead, the streets were covered by body's and blood, half of the skyscrapers were blown up and the rest burned to the steel.

This is a short peace of diary found half burn and bloody in the center of the Island

#2412/02/13
My friends and I decided to spend our weekend in my cottage.
We are leaving on Friday. I'm so happy to just spend some time with my boys.

#2412/02/14
Yet another day of work, Tyler is going to bring a friend of him, Joaquin, guess its going to be nice to get to know him.
And i heard Blake is going to bring a fuck load of alcohol to, guess its going to be a good weekend.

#2412/02/15
Our boss let us leave 2 hours earlyer.
We arravied to the cottage, unpacked everything and drank some beer and talked about the boring weekend. I'm now laying here and cant sleep because Ian and jake snores and farts like coal plants.

#2412/02/16
After a long breakfast, we started making us ready for the fishing trip, Tyler slowed us down as usual.
Then after some argue betwen Tyler and Jake we arrived as friends to the lake, I were the only one that got fish and i teased them about that just as usual.
But then this thing happend, Tyler saw some "spacecraft" crash down near "core" but we all laughed so hard about it Jake bassicly shit his pants. But then we all saw something crash rigth truh one of the biggest scrapes to then hit the ground with a blast of dust and some kind of electric flashes.

#2412/02/17
after some argue we decided to travel back to the city and wach what happend, i hesitated about it so i brouht my antique remington 870 made in the 1900s i think.
We are leaving early in the morning tomorrow.

#2412/02/20
Ian and Joaquin are both dead.
We arrived to the boundary and we immediately noticed something was wrong.
we see dead bodys on the streets, most soldiers.
We take some of their guns and try to get to the the Core without beeing noticed by the flyers hovering around the streets.

then you and 1 friend get on the ship that is heading back to their home planet to stop the invasion to planet earth

[contact me for the rest of the story]

Game Story! Big alien fps shooter

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Response to Game Story! Big alien fps shooter 2013-02-03 17:55:39 Reply

The days are really short and not very detailed. I can see it starting if that way, but you would think that as it went on it would go into deeper detail and wouldnt be so fast. It looks like your on to something.


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Response to Game Story! Big alien fps shooter 2013-02-04 00:13:00 Reply

At 2/3/13 05:55 PM, TheInnerScience wrote: The days are really short and not very detailed. I can see it starting if that way, but you would think that as it went on it would go into deeper detail and wouldnt be so fast. It looks like your on to something.

yea, i know what your saying but i tried to be as short as possible so I don't reveal everything

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Response to Game Story! Big alien fps shooter 2013-02-04 00:15:34 Reply

And this is like the script for a flash game too, isnt it? I kept thing it was like a story type.


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Response to Game Story! Big alien fps shooter 2013-02-04 00:34:09 Reply

At 2/4/13 12:15 AM, TheInnerScience wrote: And this is like the script for a flash game too, isnt it? I kept thing it was like a story type.

haha it is a story, based on a diary. You will be playing the writer of the diary (Ethan Harrison) You are a high class millionaire businesses man. You and one of the other guys and a military chief will first fight the battle from earth, but then you reallies that you have to fight it from the inside to be able to win the fight, so you hop on the ship heading for the home planet to bring the invasion army that are going to devastate planet earth.