Castle crashers picture

[TheB055]

Hello everybody its the boss here. I have just recently finished a picture(shown below) about castle crashers! So this is supposed to be a kid doodle type picture, to play with shading and drawing! Constructive criticism Welcome. But please don't be that trolling asshole! If it can use work tell me why. Thank you

[TheB055]

this may look better

[TurkeyOnAStick]

I know you've got another thread, but I think it'll be better to stick with this new one.

The best bit is the orange Castle Crasher, he's got a great cartoony style, and since he's got an arrow in the back of his head, I'm unsurprised that he's crying!

Overall I think the content of the pic is in the corners (crasher, bird, archer), which makes your pic look empty ... even though you've got a lot going on. It's a bit late now, but I would make the castle crasher bigger, giving him a bit more dominance in the pic.

You've also got a lot of different lineweights, especially with the archer, which makes it look like it doesn't belong in the same pic. Similar linewidths would provide a uniformity to the pic, bringing everything together.

[TurkeyOnAStick]

At 1/22/13 03:15 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: It's a bit late now, but I would make the castle crasher bigger, giving him a bit more dominance in the pic.

... on second thoughts, I'd bring him more to the centre. Making him bigger would be rubbish.

[TheB055]

Thank you, next picture i will take your thoughts into consideration. and also, any ideas for next pic