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Castle crashers picture 2013-01-22 15:00:42 Reply

Hello everybody its the boss here. I have just recently finished a picture(shown below) about castle crashers! So this is supposed to be a kid doodle type picture, to play with shading and drawing! Constructive criticism Welcome. But please don't be that trolling asshole! If it can use work tell me why. Thank you

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Response to Castle crashers picture 2013-01-22 15:02:14 Reply

this may look better

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Response to Castle crashers picture 2013-01-22 15:15:17 Reply

I know you've got another thread, but I think it'll be better to stick with this new one.

The best bit is the orange Castle Crasher, he's got a great cartoony style, and since he's got an arrow in the back of his head, I'm unsurprised that he's crying!

Overall I think the content of the pic is in the corners (crasher, bird, archer), which makes your pic look empty ... even though you've got a lot going on. It's a bit late now, but I would make the castle crasher bigger, giving him a bit more dominance in the pic.

You've also got a lot of different lineweights, especially with the archer, which makes it look like it doesn't belong in the same pic. Similar linewidths would provide a uniformity to the pic, bringing everything together.


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Response to Castle crashers picture 2013-01-22 15:17:27 Reply

At 1/22/13 03:15 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: It's a bit late now, but I would make the castle crasher bigger, giving him a bit more dominance in the pic.

... on second thoughts, I'd bring him more to the centre. Making him bigger would be rubbish.


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Response to Castle crashers picture 2013-01-22 15:31:35 Reply

Thank you, next picture i will take your thoughts into consideration. and also, any ideas for next pic