Well, if I were to sell it, I'd completely re-do the introductory couple of frames, re-draw all Decepticons into robots that resemble what they're parodying, and I would call the comic "Sundae"
I've written the next 100 frames, and I'm closing in on the finale I've imagined in my head. This will be a finite OVA but I hope you enjoy the ride.
The journey has only just begun.
And Xenomit, gimme a break. I'm giving this baby structure so it will survive.
"I sail through a golden nexus. By tanks with armor that glisten. I watch and I play with creations, and what I'm not reading, I listen." <-