Visual Travesties

[PyroToaster]

Hello people of the art forum I'm here with this topic for people to point out things I should improve on with my drawings, usually when I submit to the art portal with a drawing I get a one star and I sit there in awe wishing the person left a review on why he rated it one star but I digress, so hopefully I can get some clarity on what I need to fix from you guys and gals enjoy.

This picture will have a transparent background and I will fill the colors contrast and brightness

[PyroToaster]

another one I'm working on anything to point out or fix?

[PyroToaster]

I love robotic skeleton armies

[PyroToaster]

Think I should work on this as well?

[RogueSoul]

I went through your stuff, and honestly i see no reason why you should be getting low ratings. Many of your submissions are quite inventive, you have your own style and carry the ideas out pretty well... Maybe a few of the drawings seem rushed or unfinished, but then again, they're cartoons so agonizing over texture detail kinda defeats the point... So I don't really know man. Fuck the ratings.

[Tomsan]

went through all your pics, theyre nice, and often enough funny. theyre a little sketchy and sometimes a little unfinished. they also arent really detailed, but still good.

only I dont understand the complaints about the scores. you average around 3,2 points I think, which is pretty high. your lowest score is 2,34 which is still high... sooo whats the problem?

[TurkeyOnAStick]

At 1/14/13 03:24 PM, PyroToaster wrote: usually when I submit to the art portal with a drawing I get a one star and I sit there in awe wishing the person left a review on why he rated it one star

I'd take ratings with a pinch of salt, since usually there's little thought behind them compared to a review. Especially since a few of your pics use a pair of tits as a thumbnail, and the people who target these pics tend to let their testicles do the voting rather than their brains.

[PyroToaster]

At 1/15/13 06:59 PM, Tomsan wrote: went through all your pics, theyre nice, and often enough funny. theyre a little sketchy and sometimes a little unfinished. they also arent really detailed, but still good.

only I dont understand the complaints about the scores. you average around 3,2 points I think, which is pretty high. your lowest score is 2,34 which is still high... sooo whats the problem?

Thanks for that, some of the ones I did rush for the sake of putting a picture out there but that won't be the case anymore. But please don't think of it as a complaint at all, Its just sometimes I wonder why I start off with a low score when I post something, so I thought I was messing up on something obvious but couldn't see it or improve it because no one mentioned why :B , also I didn't know you can look at your score average that's pretty cool.

[PyroToaster]

At 1/15/13 06:14 PM, RogueSoul wrote: I went through your stuff, and honestly i see no reason why you should be getting low ratings. Many of your submissions are quite inventive, you have your own style and carry the ideas out pretty well... Maybe a few of the drawings seem rushed or unfinished, but then again, they're cartoons so agonizing over texture detail kinda defeats the point... So I don't really know man. Fuck the ratings.

Wow thank you very much I apreciate it, and I probably wasn't clear, what I meant was I start off with low scores I didn't mean to make it sound like I get low scores all the time for my drawings my bad.

[PyroToaster]

here ya go

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WIP

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I think this needs more work

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Almost done

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Geez I almost forgot about this thread

[PyroToaster]

Ill upload this sometime tonight hopefully, What are your guy's thoughts?

[PyroToaster]

I hope I linked it right where it shows the pictures link lol here it is, what do you guys think?

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  In the Dressing Room by PyroToaster

  Steve is a bit afraid that they'll get caught, but they do it anyway, god I need to draw new people. p.s. Their limbs are way...

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[PoisonHeart]

At 2/6/13 11:06 PM, PyroToaster wrote: Ill upload this sometime tonight hopefully, What are your guy's thoughts?

this robot's pretty cool, but seems like his top-half sorta floats, like his legs are maybe too puny for support so the shapes don't stick together in my head...i really like the gas-mask skull preceding it, tho.

[BigBadtheBazz]

I think this stuff is pretty good, I have no idea why you would be getting these ratings god dammit.
But you know what, I'll rate your stuff appropriately because it deserves it.

[PyroToaster]

Heres the final result :)

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  Da Robot Goes BEEP BOOP by PyroToaster

  Beep to da boop

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[PyroToaster]

upcoming speedpaint

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I always thought bats are the coolest animals

[Sockembop]

At 2/11/13 05:31 PM, PyroToaster wrote: I always thought bats are the coolest animals

I guess I haven't been lurking the forum enough lately because I don't think I've checked out your thread before but I really like what I see. Your characters are pretty damn zany. Nice work.

[Spedmallet]

I very much enjoy your style and themes.
Sorry I can't give you some solid critique. Best I can do is say keep it up.

[PyroToaster]

At 2/11/13 08:45 PM, Sockembop wrote:

At 2/11/13 05:31 PM, PyroToaster wrote: I always thought bats are the coolest animals

I guess I haven't been lurking the forum enough lately because I don't think I've checked out your thread before but I really like what I see. Your characters are pretty damn zany. Nice work.

Thanks man, much appreciated. Your artwork is damn fine too, you should upload more and I checked out your thread, I like the style of your characters.

[maficmelody]

Dang, cool stuff, loving the style.

[PyroToaster]

Okay I finally made a new SpeedPaint of this pic

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  Lookie What I Got!!! by PyroToaster

  I made a speedpaint of this http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=Xc0XvABb5PY *make sure to delete that space in the link*

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Hope you guys like it

[PyroToaster]

Wip

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Think I got the perspective of the anatomy right?

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Thats right I went there.

[PyroToaster]

At 2/12/13 03:33 AM, maficmelody wrote: Dang, cool stuff, loving the style.

Thanks man much appreciated!