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Visual Travesties 2013-01-14 15:24:00 Reply

Hello people of the art forum I'm here with this topic for people to point out things I should improve on with my drawings, usually when I submit to the art portal with a drawing I get a one star and I sit there in awe wishing the person left a review on why he rated it one star but I digress, so hopefully I can get some clarity on what I need to fix from you guys and gals enjoy.

This picture will have a transparent background and I will fill the colors contrast and brightness

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 04:34:29 Reply

another one I'm working on anything to point out or fix?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 04:38:44 Reply

I love robotic skeleton armies

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 14:55:39 Reply

Think I should work on this as well?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 18:14:19 Reply

I went through your stuff, and honestly i see no reason why you should be getting low ratings. Many of your submissions are quite inventive, you have your own style and carry the ideas out pretty well... Maybe a few of the drawings seem rushed or unfinished, but then again, they're cartoons so agonizing over texture detail kinda defeats the point... So I don't really know man. Fuck the ratings.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 18:59:22 Reply

went through all your pics, theyre nice, and often enough funny. theyre a little sketchy and sometimes a little unfinished. they also arent really detailed, but still good.

only I dont understand the complaints about the scores. you average around 3,2 points I think, which is pretty high. your lowest score is 2,34 which is still high... sooo whats the problem?


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 19:16:29 Reply

At 1/14/13 03:24 PM, PyroToaster wrote: usually when I submit to the art portal with a drawing I get a one star and I sit there in awe wishing the person left a review on why he rated it one star

I'd take ratings with a pinch of salt, since usually there's little thought behind them compared to a review. Especially since a few of your pics use a pair of tits as a thumbnail, and the people who target these pics tend to let their testicles do the voting rather than their brains.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 19:38:12 Reply

At 1/15/13 06:59 PM, Tomsan wrote: went through all your pics, theyre nice, and often enough funny. theyre a little sketchy and sometimes a little unfinished. they also arent really detailed, but still good.

only I dont understand the complaints about the scores. you average around 3,2 points I think, which is pretty high. your lowest score is 2,34 which is still high... sooo whats the problem?

Thanks for that, some of the ones I did rush for the sake of putting a picture out there but that won't be the case anymore. But please don't think of it as a complaint at all, Its just sometimes I wonder why I start off with a low score when I post something, so I thought I was messing up on something obvious but couldn't see it or improve it because no one mentioned why :B , also I didn't know you can look at your score average that's pretty cool.

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 19:44:22 Reply

At 1/15/13 06:14 PM, RogueSoul wrote: I went through your stuff, and honestly i see no reason why you should be getting low ratings. Many of your submissions are quite inventive, you have your own style and carry the ideas out pretty well... Maybe a few of the drawings seem rushed or unfinished, but then again, they're cartoons so agonizing over texture detail kinda defeats the point... So I don't really know man. Fuck the ratings.

Wow thank you very much I apreciate it, and I probably wasn't clear, what I meant was I start off with low scores I didn't mean to make it sound like I get low scores all the time for my drawings my bad.

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-19 10:24:28 Reply

here ya go

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-19 10:27:17 Reply

WIP

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-21 19:03:11 Reply

I think this needs more work

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-21 21:51:12 Reply

Almost done

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-06 23:01:05 Reply

Geez I almost forgot about this thread

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-06 23:06:41 Reply

Ill upload this sometime tonight hopefully, What are your guy's thoughts?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-08 00:30:45 Reply

I hope I linked it right where it shows the pictures link lol here it is, what do you guys think?

  • In the Dressing Room
    In the Dressing Room by PyroToaster

    Steve is a bit afraid that they'll get caught, but they do it anyway, god I need to draw new people. p.s. Their limbs are way...

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-08 04:50:54 Reply

At 2/6/13 11:06 PM, PyroToaster wrote: Ill upload this sometime tonight hopefully, What are your guy's thoughts?

this robot's pretty cool, but seems like his top-half sorta floats, like his legs are maybe too puny for support so the shapes don't stick together in my head...i really like the gas-mask skull preceding it, tho.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-08 16:42:16 Reply

Heres the final result :)

  • Da Robot Goes BEEP BOOP
    Da Robot Goes BEEP BOOP by PyroToaster

    Beep to da boop

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 17:30:02 Reply

upcoming speedpaint

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 17:31:35 Reply

I always thought bats are the coolest animals

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 20:45:01 Reply

At 2/11/13 05:31 PM, PyroToaster wrote: I always thought bats are the coolest animals

I guess I haven't been lurking the forum enough lately because I don't think I've checked out your thread before but I really like what I see. Your characters are pretty damn zany. Nice work.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 21:05:16 Reply

I very much enjoy your style and themes.
Sorry I can't give you some solid critique. Best I can do is say keep it up.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-12 00:39:18 Reply

At 2/11/13 08:45 PM, Sockembop wrote:
At 2/11/13 05:31 PM, PyroToaster wrote: I always thought bats are the coolest animals
I guess I haven't been lurking the forum enough lately because I don't think I've checked out your thread before but I really like what I see. Your characters are pretty damn zany. Nice work.

Thanks man, much appreciated. Your artwork is damn fine too, you should upload more and I checked out your thread, I like the style of your characters.

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-12 03:33:01 Reply

Dang, cool stuff, loving the style.

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-15 19:00:23 Reply

Okay I finally made a new SpeedPaint of this pic

  • Lookie What I Got!!!
    Lookie What I Got!!! by PyroToaster

    I made a speedpaint of this http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=Xc0XvABb5PY *make sure to delete that space in the link*

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:14:44 Reply

Wip

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:16:27 Reply

Think I got the perspective of the anatomy right?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:17:46 Reply

Thats right I went there.

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:20:52 Reply

At 2/12/13 03:33 AM, maficmelody wrote: Dang, cool stuff, loving the style.

Thanks man much appreciated!

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-19 00:01:42 Reply

At 2/18/13 11:16 PM, PyroToaster wrote: Think I got the perspective of the anatomy right?

This was the most that I like and where psychedelic distortion
if you finish that picture you could win a discount of 50% in toilet paper of my part and 5 point of newground vote


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