Yo my friend took his

[SKS]

Mic away but he didn't take my fight to be an ill mc.

So I recorded a rap on my cellphone and put that shit on FB. STR8 FIRE NO BEAT ALL ACAPELLA. Tell me what you think of my flow? I think i'm getting better compared to my other stuff.
JAM DIS TRACK BRO My facebook is set to public so feel free to like it everyone! I'm trying to get as many likes as I can! So feel free to like/share all you want if you enjoy it. Or even leave a comment on the video! Excuse the sound quality of it being a cellphone tho!!!

TELL US ALL A TIME OR TIME YOU OVERCAME THE ODDS OR HAD A SITUATION GET HARDER AND STILL MADE IT WORK?!

[N30Chaos]

It took me a second to get that first comment.

[SKS]

What did you think of my rap?

Let me rephrase my OP question

Tell us about a time where you didn't have all the correct tools to do what you wanted to do and had to improvise and you still managed to pull something off rather nicely considering what was available in comparison to what you needed to do it right the first time...

I wanted my friends USB mic and a beat with a good program, but nope I still managed to record a freestyle with no beat and I think that my flow is getting better as I make track after track(this rap was primarily to work on flow anyway)

AGAIN WHAT DID YOU THINK OF MY RAP? LISTEN FROM START TO FINISH! PLZ EXCUSE THAT ITS RECORDED ON A CELLPHONE!!! HOW IS MY FLOW? LIKE/SHARE/COMMENT ON FB AND HERE?!!! I know you can't like it on NG, but whatever you get the idea and you can like on FB !!!!!! Thanks everyone! I always appreciate feedback.

[SKS]

I just wanna know what you guys think of my rap; how does my flow sound to you? I personally think I am improving, but that could me being conceited. How does it compare you guys to my earlier tracks? I did this with no beat and really wanted to rely on my flow to provide rhythm did I achieve this? Did I do well?

I'm really looking for constructive criticism, but I can't get enough from the audio portal and such, but I also leave it open to question so there is more than just MY MUSIC or MY projects to talk about, because I do like to include everyone, but I use my own works as the example ice breaker ON TOPIC to post these songs is all. I appreciate you letting me get my criticism and allowing the other discussion to continue too!

Thanks guys.

You can keep your comments in this thread. Feel free to answer the question I posted in the 4th post of this thread.

[ManDeep]

At 12/26/12 03:08 AM, Ma1achi wrote: your a idiot

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[Xaelath]

This make me wonder

[Bladezguy]

At 12/26/12 03:08 AM, Ma1achi wrote: your a idiot

You're an idiot.

[SubparTony]

At 12/26/12 03:08 AM, Ma1achi wrote: your a idiot

Whose idiot?

[Otto]

Really really terrible and I'm not even trying to be mean

[TheColourAwesome]

I saw words I didn't like

[BostonJax]

SKS... you're crafty... friend took away your mic & you pull out the cellphone to record on ;)