Need some opinions plz

[SheepNinja]

Hey guys.... i'm new to flash and animating and stuff. So i would like to here some opinions on my first video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9mTJpIEjFKM

[StumpyCK]

At 12/21/12 05:19 PM, SheepNinja wrote: Hey guys.... i'm new to flash and animating and stuff. So i would like to here some opinions on my first video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9mTJpIEjFKM

I though the animation was great!:) Just need better VA's and story.

[TheCreator88NG]

At 12/21/12 08:36 PM, StumpyCK wrote:

At 12/21/12 05:19 PM, SheepNinja wrote: Hey guys.... i'm new to flash and animating and stuff. So i would like to here some opinions on my first video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9mTJpIEjFKM

I though the animation was great!:) Just need better VA's and story.

I agree with SheepNinja 100% try working on the story a little more! great animation! better than some that ive made actaully. but it wouldnt hurt you to try to add a bit more humor to your story.

[Wegra]

Well it's pretty standard just needs some better humor. Try not to overdue it with the Naruto characters but thats just me

[SheepNinja]

Thanks to all u people for the replies, I appreciate it ! This was just a test... so i guest I could do better if I put alot of work into it.