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The Art of StripmakerF! Dec. 7th, 2012 @ 07:18 PM Reply

Hello NG people! I shall show you what I can do as of right now!
Gimme feedback, comments, praise, etc, and I will do my best to respond in a positive manner.

I was also wondering if we could do a collaboration sometime.
Let me know what you guys think!

http://stripmakerf.deviantart.com/

http://stripmakerf.newgrounds.com/

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Response to The Art of StripmakerF! Dec. 7th, 2012 @ 07:29 PM Reply

1. use your previous thread
2. practice, a lot. If this pic is any indication of your current skill, you'll need it.
3. keep calm and carry on


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Response to The Art of StripmakerF! Dec. 7th, 2012 @ 07:59 PM Reply

At 12/7/12 07:18 PM, stripmakerF wrote: Hello NG people! I shall show you what I can do as of right now!
Gimme feedback, comments, praise, etc, and I will do my best to respond in a positive manner.

I was also wondering if we could do a collaboration sometime.
Let me know what you guys think!

http://stripmakerf.deviantart.com/

http://stripmakerf.newgrounds.com/

the Japanese Katakana is badly written, I read it Sa-Su-Ku instead of Sasuke, its been badly butchered by the handwriting.

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Response to The Art of StripmakerF! Dec. 7th, 2012 @ 10:37 PM Reply

I'm gonna say it...I don't mean to discourage you, I'm just being honest here. This is bad. Really bad. As with the previous poster says (I'm sorry, but your username escapes me at the moment), the katakana is very wrong. Plus, why write in katakana anyways? I write in English, and if English is your first language, so should you. Butchering another language doesn't quite bode well for you, and again, not trying to be mean or discouraging, but seriously.


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Response to The Art of StripmakerF! Dec. 8th, 2012 @ 08:08 AM Reply

You have a really quirky style going...
It's not a bad thing per se, I kind of like it. It looks satyrical in way.
This piece in particular might not be your best work, but the rest of them aren't bad.
I'd like to see more work, see how your art evolves. Maybe try to make backgrounds, or maybe have a few characters interact on the same drawing? Fighting together, striking a pose, what have you.
There isn't much to critique on for now though.
Nothing that hasn't already been said, anyway.

I think you've got potential though :D
But that's just my personal opinion.

Keep at it.


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Response to The Art of StripmakerF! Jan. 12th, 2013 @ 01:23 PM Reply

THX gonna use your wise words haha