At 12/7/12 02:48 PM, KiwiSundae wrote:
Well, hello there! I shalt be showing you what I can do as of right now! This is where I will be posting a good majority of my sketches, while my finished works will go into my actual portal. So, uh, yeah. Gimme feedback, comments, praise, etc, and I will do my best to respond in a positive manner. So, here is my first sketch done in a sort of stylized style. I am actually coloring her in right now, and am making a poster-style background for her.
I was also wondering if we could do collaboration sometime. Perhaps soon? I dunno. Let me know what you guys think!
Look, I'll... make it really brief, and hopefully it gets through.
Again, your anatomy is wrong. Her legs are weird, her waist is riding up way too high, the color scheme between her hair and skin is confusing...
But overall. It's the anatomy. You're sick of hearing it, yes, but did it ever occur to you that you hear it so much because it's what you need to master before you move on?
It's like you're asking how to beat the elite four before you've even beaten Misty yet. We could tell, but it's pointless because you haven't reached that point yet.
Yes, anatomy is boring, but it needs to be done, just like level-grinding your pokemon needs to be done if you want to beat gym leaders.
So, chances are, you won't get much criticism from anyone who knows their shit here until you show the will to work on that aspect. Because it's your glaring weakness right now, and you're chosing to ignore it because you seem to have convinced yourself that people are saying so just to piss you off.
If you want to draw characters, knowing how the human body works is essential. There's no two ways around it.
