My New Rap

[Nickisabi]

I freestyled this on paper the other day. Tell me what you think.

Try to chew don't choke, my rhymes are colder than a holocaust joke. I send rappers up in smoke with a new lesson, bust a cap like smith and wesson just testin' the rest in line who's next to be drowned with an ill text. 'cause I got the ill intent to bust without relent. I'm a militant Very dilligent. I've been sent to lay down the groove and bust a move rip it smooth too great to lose. Sometimes I don't listen don't know what I'm missin' Don't know if I'll go on a mission or not. If you've been dissin' you know who's been missin' a lot. Hate this and hit graves and rot. They appear and I hit them on the spot. Back to the top. Watchin' the tube gettin' heavy with the blues. Rape, murder, politics, sports, and the weather. Had the nerve to call it the "news" altogether. Waitin' for the time trying to bust another rhyme Hearin' the lectures from the masters; Notorious B.I.G. , Tupac, Eminem, Mobb Deep, it's a technical science with the Beasties. I leave these words for history to reoccur. A white rapper has happened again. Lose the Beastie Boys, Wolfpac, and Eminem. This is a mix of Nas and MC Ren. The future of you all is in my residual the proof by visual I don't Kid you all. Snatch it, latch it, More urgent than an emergency hatchet. This is my style you can't Match it. When I bust a rhyme you'd better catch it.

Did this to a Notorious B.I.G. track.

[Kofra]

Try to chew don't choke,
my rhymes are colder than a holocaust joke.
I send rappers up in smoke with a new lesson,
bust a cap like smith and wesson just testin' the rest in line who's next to be drowned with an ill text.
'cause I got the ill intent to bust without relent.
I'm a militant Very dilligent.
I've been sent to lay down the groove and bust a move rip it smooth too great to lose.
Sometimes I don't listen don't know what I'm missin' Don't know if I'll go on a mission or not.
If you've been dissin' you know who's been missin' a lot.
Hate this and hit graves and rot.
They appear and I hit them on the spot.
Back to the top.
Watchin' the tube gettin' heavy with the blues.
Rape, murder, politics, sports, and the weather.
Had the nerve to call it the "news" altogether.
Waitin' for the time trying to bust another rhyme Hearin' the lectures from the masters;
Notorious B.I.G. , Tupac, Eminem, Mobb Deep, it's a technical science with the Beasties.
I leave these words for history to reoccur.
A white rapper has happened again.
Lose the Beastie Boys, Wolfpac, and Eminem.
This is a mix of Nas and MC Ren.
The future of you all is in my residual the proof by visual I don't Kid you all.
Snatch it, latch it, More urgent than an emergency hatchet.
This is my style you can't Match it.
When I bust a rhyme you'd better catch it.

cool rap, but I just don't like lines 3 and 4 . What is the beat?

[Nickisabi]

At 12/1/12 08:48 PM, Kofra wrote:

cool rap, but I just don't like lines 3 and 4 . What is the beat?

My beat for this is Hypnotize by Biggie Smallz.