Critique my art

[UNCOMMITTED]

i have 3 drawings on my page right now and would greatly appreciate any criticism i can get, i have worked hard and think my art is coming along quite nicely

[Mownkey]

You still have a looooooooooong way on to improve yourself, mate.
Looking at every single art you submitted, I feel a serious lack of anatomy.
This one - the arms and the head. That's everything I don't like on this one. The right arm might be a bit shorter than the other one, and the left one is too fat. About the head - it's too horizontal if you look at the rest of his body. So, study some perspectives, bro.

This one - I like the way you drew the body and shaded it. Pretty cool. But the eyes aren't the same size and the ears are too small.

This one - dude, what the fu? Did you look at his neck? Way too tall and too fat and those details you left on it aren't necessary. I don't like the look of those lips. The tie should be bigger.

Overall, I think you figured out how to shade properly, my only complain is the weird anatomy.

[xariast]

You have a good style ;)

[ReNaeNae]

At 11/10/12 09:03 PM, UNCOMMITTED wrote: i have 3 drawings on my page right now and would greatly appreciate any criticism i can get, i have worked hard and think my art is coming along quite nicely

If you want actual 'critiques', please post your work in the thread (as per the rules and stuff). Otherwise, if you're just looking for reviews, you can post in the Review Request Club thread in C&C or bump the Art Forum version (what a huge fail that was, huh?). Thanks.