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Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-20 19:41:20 Reply

You have just entered the Cyber Space Base. Here's where my vibrant cartoony art is hung. If you enjoy cartoony art then you are in the right place now view my pictures from SPACE! echo echo echo. Leave some feed back so I know you're alive and still functioning. And if my name makes you feel uncomfortable don't worry I don't bite I only 32 bit(sorry for the bad joke I really am)

Now here's my first submition right off the grill titled " Platformer Pests" subtitled " Foot Fising" be confused, cringe, or enjoy it's all up to you.

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-20 19:47:32 Reply

Another one

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-20 20:21:49 Reply

At 10/20/12 07:41 PM, thepixelizer wrote:
Now here's my first submition right off the grill titled " Platformer Pests" subtitled " Foot Fising" be confused, cringe, or enjoy it's all up to you.

lol that was pretty funny!


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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-21 00:32:24 Reply

um... ok. So far, I really haven't found these all that funny. Maybe its out of context, may be its because I don't know the characters all that well, maybe its because you only have two comics posted so it doesn't have any time to grow on me, or maybe its because they are just not that funny.
Post more and I can get a better handle on why I'm not rolling with laughter.

You also need to lay out your comics better. Your pacing and layouts are pretty horrible, perhaps another reason I do not find them funny.
Study other comic strips, look at they way they are constructed, how they flow and tell the story. even simple ones like XKCD cyanide and happiness, order of the stick, the amazing super powers or the early days of MS paint adventure.
If that doesn't help any, go out and get some books on doing small comic strips or look online for tutorials. Their are tools and resources and people willing to help you if you will just go out and look for them.

One bit of good I can give is that the art isn't that bad. it might take a bit more refining if you want to continue this, but that should come naturally with time if you continue to try and better yourself and your work.

good luck and keep working. If you do your sure to get there eventually.


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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-21 01:33:00 Reply

Wow you must be an expert! Thanks for the advice I am how ever working on the story right now these two are just character development strips that I had sitting and collecting dust. Here goes the main story it has to be cut in half so it can fit in this forum though. Sorry if the jokes were to dull I'll try harder. If you thought that one was dull you'll really hate this one I didn't post the main story because I was thinking of rewriting it.

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-21 01:35:20 Reply

second half

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-21 01:47:24 Reply

Here goes comic 2 half1 of the main story boy I hope this saves this thread. These are the only files I have left that haven't been lost.

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-10-21 01:52:02 Reply

here goes part 2 half 2 so sorry this forum only lets you post 200 kb files

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2012-11-04 18:12:32 Reply

Here goes another creation of mine see description in the link even though it's pretty self explanatory.

Mallet Man the Vandal

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2013-01-14 17:51:10 Reply

Here's another picture it's not any thing flashy but I just started using a tablet '_' ... that's a difference I guess.

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2013-01-15 02:58:21 Reply

This is DOOMER! A crazy little guy in a top hat with a giant pointing finger... OF DEATH! So what do you think?

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2013-04-21 18:15:34 Reply

new picture titled "Electric Jam Fest" it's a picture for a playlist I made, But I liked it so much that I had to post it here.

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2014-08-16 19:43:08 Reply

the rest is on my profile

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2014-08-17 01:09:52 Reply

I suggest using a better font than what you're using now.
These pixelated styled fonts seems like a better and more fitting font for your webcomic. :D

and maybe use proper punctuation and capitalization...or better overall grammar... I'm sorry...the grammar nazi inside me can't help it.

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2014-08-20 22:35:22 Reply

Part two of Platformer Pests Mirror Misadventure.
The rest is on my profile

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Response to Pixel's Cyber Space Base 2014-08-20 23:02:46 Reply

At 8/17/14 01:09 AM, 123mine123 wrote: I suggest using a better font than what you're using now.
These pixelated styled fonts seems like a better and more fitting font for your webcomic. :D

and maybe use proper punctuation and capitalization...or better overall grammar... I'm sorry...the grammar nazi inside me can't help it.

Thanks for the fonts, And I've started adding proper grammar too.