Hey Snowy, not be a dick, but I still think the menu could be better. To be honest, I don't like the idea of not having the collab in just one stream with transitions. With all of the parts together, the collab only goes for 40 seconds (about), with transitions it will be about 52seconds. I still suggest there should be more parts added to the collab, even though we have reached the deadline, I think extending the deadline until we get around 5 more parts is best.
From my experience, the menu's are the first part the audience judge on, and this one just doesn't do it for me sorry mate, the line tool shouldn't be used I reckon.
So yeah, try get a few more parts and make it into one whole stream of animations, it's what is best for collabs like these. You only have menus like this one if the parts are longer than 10 seconds or so, not 3-6seconds.