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ForskinGump's Oct. 17th, 2012 @ 02:27 PM Reply

Started picking up the pencil too long ago, and I'm starting to work on my anatomy more. I dont know what else to say so critique give opinions whatever.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 17th, 2012 @ 02:31 PM Reply

Tried the same face but larger

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 17th, 2012 @ 02:49 PM Reply

At 10/17/12 02:31 PM, ForskinGump wrote: Tried the same face but larger

The breasts - they are too big. Everything else looks fairly decent.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 17th, 2012 @ 02:58 PM Reply

Try to clean up all those rough lines around the edges, those initial sketch lines.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 17th, 2012 @ 03:54 PM Reply

At 10/17/12 02:49 PM, Mownkey wrote: The breasts - they are too big.

I think they're fine the way they are.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 17th, 2012 @ 03:57 PM Reply

At 10/17/12 02:49 PM, Mownkey wrote:
At 10/17/12 02:31 PM, ForskinGump wrote: Tried the same face but larger
The breasts - they are too big. Everything else looks fairly decent.

Don't listen to him, breasts are never too big.

Nice work, I definitely like the first one. The chin is a bit too small on the second one but other than that it looks good as well.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 18th, 2012 @ 02:27 AM Reply

At 10/17/12 03:57 PM, MrFap wrote:
At 10/17/12 02:49 PM, Mownkey wrote:
At 10/17/12 02:31 PM, ForskinGump wrote: Tried the same face but larger
The breasts - they are too big. Everything else looks fairly decent.
Don't listen to him, breasts are never too big.

Nice work, I definitely like the first one. The chin is a bit too small on the second one but other than that it looks good as well.

That's the spirit!

but yeah I have a bit of a habit of making the chin to small.

Going in a different direction heres a not too distant in the future soldier sketch.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 18th, 2012 @ 09:28 AM Reply

The shading on the pants is kind of random... Maybe try shading darker toward the belt? I think the picture could benefit from a bigger contrast between the light shading and the dark shading, specifically on the left side where it should be viewed as further away. The anatomy is kind of weird... the hand on the right should probably be a little longer.

Good work! *o* Your skills are amazing!

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 18th, 2012 @ 05:20 PM Reply

This one started off all wrong had to redo a lot but I pushed through my mistakes. Not the best, but hopefully my drawings will go smoother

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 18th, 2012 @ 07:56 PM Reply

Will probably update this one later. Here it is so far

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 19th, 2012 @ 01:16 AM Reply

:no blank posts

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 19th, 2012 @ 01:17 AM Reply

Drew it randomly turned out waay better than expected and I usually fuck up frontal angle of the face

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 21st, 2012 @ 02:14 PM Reply

At 10/20/12 05:05 AM, BigBadtheBazz wrote: I like your style!

Thanks.

Another

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 24th, 2012 @ 02:29 PM Reply

Somethings a little wonky about the neck and head but im still pleased with this one

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 24th, 2012 @ 02:33 PM Reply

At 10/24/12 02:29 PM, ForskinGump wrote: Somethings a little wonky about the neck and head but im still pleased with this one

I'm jelly bro, that anatomy is rad.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 24th, 2012 @ 11:51 PM Reply

At 10/24/12 02:33 PM, M-Maher wrote:
At 10/24/12 02:29 PM, ForskinGump wrote: Somethings a little wonky about the neck and head but im still pleased with this one
I'm jelly bro, that anatomy is rad.

Yeah my anatomy improved quite a bit when I actually took to studying it and practicing, still a ways to go. Just give Andrew Loomis' book figure drawing for what it's worth a look, it really helped me.

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 29th, 2012 @ 04:06 AM Reply

At 10/28/12 06:46 AM, BigBadtheBazz wrote:
Going in a different direction heres a not too distant in the future soldier sketch.
I forgot to mention that I love this pic right here.

Haha thanks.

Heres another face sketch

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Response to ForskinGump's Oct. 30th, 2012 @ 03:05 AM Reply

If you know what this is then good for you getting passed the archers, man that part was a bitch.

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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 2nd, 2012 @ 01:28 PM Reply

What happens when your thread gets to the end of page 3?

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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 4th, 2012 @ 06:58 PM Reply

Skin tones, tedious.

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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 6th, 2012 @ 06:17 PM Reply

Moar girls

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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 6th, 2012 @ 06:24 PM Reply

Doodle or Die drawing with a tablet! I really need to get my own.

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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 14th, 2012 @ 03:51 AM Reply

Bleh

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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 14th, 2012 @ 11:16 AM Reply

At 11/14/12 03:51 AM, ForskinGump wrote: Bleh

Hmmm looks like you still need a bit more work on certain anatomy parts and other preference. Like learning how to structure the face better on angle shots and side profile shots. I think heading back to Loomis and paying attention on the planes of the face wouldn't hurt (particularly the mouth and nose and cheekbone tend to be the hardest to get right). Other things that need work on is understanding hair, controlling your pencil pressure, work on hands a bit more (it's not entirely bad but I think drawing a page full of hands would definitely help a bit when drawing them with people), and understanding cloth.


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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 14th, 2012 @ 02:34 PM Reply

At 11/14/12 11:16 AM, ZaneZansorrow wrote:
At 11/14/12 03:51 AM, ForskinGump wrote: Bleh
Hmmm looks like you still need a bit more work on certain anatomy parts and other preference. Like learning how to structure the face better on angle shots and side profile shots. I think heading back to Loomis and paying attention on the planes of the face wouldn't hurt (particularly the mouth and nose and cheekbone tend to be the hardest to get right). Other things that need work on is understanding hair, controlling your pencil pressure, work on hands a bit more (it's not entirely bad but I think drawing a page full of hands would definitely help a bit when drawing them with people), and understanding cloth.

Yeah indeed I've already been looking at Loomis a lot! If you're saying my face drawings look flat then I can understand that I've attempted that plane exercise a few times but not successfully I'll get back to it and try to make them look more 3D for sure.

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Response to ForskinGump's Nov. 26th, 2012 @ 06:23 AM Reply

Whaddup

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