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blade55555
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2 short animations feedback? 2012-10-02 03:42:32 Reply

Hey guys long time no see. Used to make lots of flash video's when I was younger but got busy and recently got into it again.

I feel even though I haven't animated in 5 years I am better now then before (if you want to see old work watch the dbz one for a lol at awful). Anyway since I started again almost a week ago I did a little different style and have 2 animations (very short) and would like feedback on how bad they are and what you think I should improve.

Thanks in advance to you ballers who help!

My first one:
http://www.fileize.com/view/eda7cf2e-2ef/

My second one (has sound):
http://www.fileize.com/view/0cbdb33e-f97/

MistyEntertainment
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Response to 2 short animations feedback? 2012-10-04 01:15:12 Reply

The first one had a little too much movement. Maybe you could slow it down just a little. Other than that, it's pretty good. The second one was also nicely done, no complaints about it.