How can I make this better?

[Asperchu]

Can anybody help me?

[Mownkey]

Well, you can add some color, some background, some sound effects and... voila!

[Daagah]

ok, first of all, are you using onion skinning? his body is moving around like crazy. you should fix that.

i see that you included a bit of anticipation before he fired his gun, which is good, but the recoil is a bit too slow. on top of that, the projectile moves too slow to make the recoil (and that the guy tied to a tree is blown away) appear natural.

the projectile should continue in the same direction, it looks a bit like it hits an invicible wall at the end.

i hope this helps, i find it a bit hard to explain things properly so just send me a PM if you don't understand what the hell i'm on about, and i'll try to help you further.

[MistyEntertainment]

you might wanna re-draw his legs, the whole thing looks really shaky.

[Asperchu]

At 9/25/12 04:02 PM, Daagah wrote: ok, first of all, are you using onion skinning? his body is moving around like crazy. you should fix that.

i see that you included a bit of anticipation before he fired his gun, which is good, but the recoil is a bit too slow. on top of that, the projectile moves too slow to make the recoil (and that the guy tied to a tree is blown away) appear natural.

the projectile should continue in the same direction, it looks a bit like it hits an invicible wall at the end.

i hope this helps, i find it a bit hard to explain things properly so just send me a PM if you don't understand what the hell i'm on about, and i'll try to help you further.

helped alot
The invisible wall was supposed to be there.
Something new I guess
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/905cfd639c22407c7d2fc22a 1ec39dd9
I need help on this, yes I know that the shadows are shaking like crazy.