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My Music 2012-09-06 22:04:06 Reply

I'm gonna start a thread for my music that i write! I will post from time to time and have it critiqued, I'll post the first one i would like to share. It's called "liquid metal" tell me what you think.

Liquid metal

You living it up you got the felling you chill in you seat or your off dealing , Hiding your feet when I'm around Your breaking up your fading sounds living for me gonna groove for me making this land a liquid sea

Liquid metal
BAby
It's metal baby
Get off

The edge of your seat your glued to the beat your wondering around this red shaded town there eating it up just making there rounds seeing what it's gotta be not off in some movie time sounds just waving In a liquids sea

Electro rift

8 track stereo life
Pretty things move your sight
Hard beats knocking
Liquid metal here we go
8 track stereo life
Pretty things move your sight
Hard beats knocking
Liquid metal here we go

Being around new life has been found there eating so profound pillows in shoe its to hard living for you that why you see I'm not around following you it's a new curfew tho you have to know im a living electro

Liquid metal
BAby
It's metal baby
Get off

Singing of you I'm done rub my hands of you batting your eyes my minds in disguise walking the streets your staring a beat of your own walking alone it's haunting I know but it's liquid metal her we go

8 track stereo life
Pretty things move your sight
Hard beats knocking
Liquid metal here we go
8 track stereo life
Pretty things move your sight
Hard beats knocking
Liquid metal here we go


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