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Id like some critique on a portrait

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micky315
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Id like some critique on a portrait Sep. 1st, 2012 @ 11:58 PM Reply

Thanks! Bonus to anyone who can figure out who it's a portrait of. (Although you probably wont because it sucks :P)

Id like some critique on a portrait


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Response to Id like some critique on a portrait Sep. 2nd, 2012 @ 05:17 AM Reply

Did you draw that?

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Response to Id like some critique on a portrait Sep. 2nd, 2012 @ 06:49 AM Reply

Looks good to me, can't really criticise..

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Response to Id like some critique on a portrait Sep. 2nd, 2012 @ 09:20 AM Reply

At 9/1/12 11:58 PM, micky315 wrote: Thanks! Bonus to anyone who can figure out who it's a portrait of. (Although you probably wont because it sucks :P)

That's a pretty good portrait.
To make it better you might want to refine your shading and outlining a little, like less sketchy and thinner.
Also the hair is a bit messy, because all the hairs are single lines. You could make them be in bundles, so that it looks more realistic and you don't have to draw every single hair.

Keep it up!


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Response to Id like some critique on a portrait Sep. 2nd, 2012 @ 01:31 PM Reply

At 9/2/12 05:17 AM, Mownkey wrote: Did you draw that?

Why would I post it if I didn't? xD


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Response to Id like some critique on a portrait Sep. 3rd, 2012 @ 06:28 PM Reply

This is pretty good! The shading looks right, and the anatomy seems accurate. The only part that I see is off, is the nose. The person is looking right at me, but the nose seems to be in a 3/4 view. Anyways, you have real potential, so keep it up!