At 10/5/12 03:29 PM, Buujack wrote:
At 10/5/12 02:47 PM, Teqneek wrote:
Okay, here's my debut album.Im not being a prick, im giving u constructive critism ok?
20 tracks fo dat ass. Enjoy!
first of all, you're voice in most of the songs is to weak.
Regarding your comment to SJD- He IS black! And why do you care either way? Why are you so fixated on what color someone is anyway? Rhetorical question- you're an obvious racist. You keep commenting on that shit and it's getting old.
Anyway, I don't know if I'm feeding your trolling right now (since it seems like that's all you ever do), but I'm proud of this album. Also, There's no way you've heard most of the songs by the time you wrote that, but still, a lot of these tracks are earlier recordings.
I started getting much better around the time I wrote the title track. The album is not it chronological order, but on some of these tracks you can tell I was just starting out.
Be more aggresive. the lyrics in anti swag was the most decent one, but it sounds u just woke up and started rapping be more aggresive.
Anti Swag was the third song I ever made, and I've definitely put out much better work since then, so idk why you think that.
i can tell in ur songs that ur holding back. let it out.
In some of those songs I was holding back, because I was new to this.
im not a hater, just a player woooooow.
All you've ever done is hate on everyone here. Maybe you're trolling and maybe you're just a negative dude, but I do appreciate the constructive criticism if you were being genuine. I think that my skill has been improving rapidly with every song, and I learned a lot making this album. I've only been rapping for a year and a half, and I'm nowhere near as skilled as I think I can end up being. So if you check out the album, I hope you enjoy it.
Once the next page loads I'm posting this album link again, since the original will probably be buried soon.