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Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 01:13 AM Reply

First, things went by slow
One day at a time,
Until the day , I figured things out
Reading more until I mastered the concept
King for all time.

Just a poem I was working on. Figured I share it with NG.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 01:29 AM Reply

That was a poem.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 01:31 AM Reply

Was that a poem.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 01:35 AM Reply

Poem a that was
And poem b will be
Poem c can see
The future d
Poem so fair
In the golden hair
Of the night
That was
A poem


It made more sense in my head.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:05 AM Reply

Good start, would like to read the full completed version. I want to write a poem about poetry one day


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:10 AM Reply

i'm about to start blasting this topic with my sexy rhymes >:(

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:20 AM Reply

Cool points aplenty
Sexing up your town
Many a dropped panty
When he comes around

or something

Don't leave me alone, please blast this topic :(


It made more sense in my head.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:39 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 03:20 AM, Tremulos wrote: Cool points aplenty
Sexing up your town
Many a dropped panty
When he comes around

or something

Don't leave me alone, please blast this topic :(

oh man, i can't.. now i'm nervous...

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:47 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 03:39 AM, Cool-Points wrote:
At 8/10/12 03:20 AM, Tremulos wrote: Cool points aplenty
Sexing up your town
Many a dropped panty
When he comes around

or something

Don't leave me alone, please blast this topic :(
oh man, i can't.. now i'm nervous...

No man, don't do this
I need someone with me
Someone by my side
To love and to cherish me
So take a stand!
Fight while you can fight
Love while you can love
Remove thy fear away from you
And come with me to the place
Where all your dreams come true


It made more sense in my head.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:48 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 03:47 AM, Tremulos wrote: No man, don't do this
I need someone with me
Someone by my side
To love and to cherish me
So take a stand!
Fight while you can fight
Love while you can love
Remove thy fear away from you
And come with me to the place
Where all your dreams come true

Damn that one is clunky. This is why I can't do it alone.


It made more sense in my head.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:54 AM Reply

I am glad that people are enjoying my poem.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 03:56 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 03:54 AM, DoctorStrongbad wrote: I am glad that people are enjoying my poem.

Your words are inspiring
Your touch exhilarating
Stay true to yourself
The strongest of the bad


It made more sense in my head.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:15 AM Reply

you wanna see clunky? too bad, all i got's funky.
foolin' around like a monkey, all the ladies call my hunky,
i'd throw down poems but i don't know 'em; i know that's kinda junky.
DoctorStrongbad travels through time like an ironclad badass,
he's so bad, he makes your DAD get mad, and fight your ass in the grass.
from selling silk in prague to tradin' rhinos for giraffes,
he's been all over time; he's even been in a 1636 Harvard class.
he's pillaged many a villager and raped many an ass.
hell, he even taught the cavemen how to pass gas
i don't doubt- Doc Strong's seen shit we just never have
and that's why he's the illest Time Minister: Doctor Strongbad.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:28 AM Reply

Damn, that's what I'm talkin about! Sick rhymes man.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:40 AM Reply

Cool-points and CockGobbler: rap battle. Now.


It made more sense in my head.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:48 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 04:32 AM, CockGobbler wrote:
At 8/10/12 04:15 AM, Cool-Points wrote: you wanna see clunky? too bad, all i got's funky.
foolin' around like a monkey, all the ladies call my hunky,
i'd throw down poems but i don't know 'em; i know that's kinda junky.
DoctorStrongbad travels through time like an ironclad badass,
he's so bad, he makes your DAD get mad, and fight your ass in the grass.
from selling silk in prague to tradin' rhinos for giraffes,
he's been all over time; he's even been in a 1636 Harvard class.
he's pillaged many a villager and raped many an ass.
hell, he even taught the cavemen how to pass gas
i don't doubt- Doc Strong's seen shit we just never have
and that's why he's the illest Time Minister: Doctor Strongbad.
This reads more like a rap, we're supposed to be dropping poems man, not spitting this crap.
Well, whatever, I like rap too, since you rapped at all of us I guess I'll rap at you.
Yeah it's C to the O to the C to the K, add a Gobbler on the end and you've got a gay!
Yeah I love to Gobble cocks all night and all day, I stand on the street corner saying "hey baby, coming my way?"
Bro you may have points but you sure ain't cool, your points are in your ability to be a tool.
Nah, just kidding, you're a pretty cool guy, I could see you walking around with a coat and tie
With a job offer, but then you go to it high. You snort a bump before anything you do, don't even lie.
But coke's awesome man, don't play the fool. You will earn some points from doing than then you'll really be cool.
See the wordplay there? Yeah I'm the wordplay king. I'm tired now though, how about I tap you back into the ring.

i've got a job offer for you gobbler, it's called my cock ;)
....that wasn't an attack, seriously, you make me hard as a rock. ;)
thanks man, it's no lie that i rock a suit and tie,
one time i really did try to apply for a job while high
but i was way too obvious; said they don't "hire my kind."
weed though, not coke. shit fucks with my mind.
i am also tired, it's about time for me to sleep.
i'll ring the bell for round 2, Apollo. "Ding, Ding."

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:55 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 04:51 AM, CockGobbler wrote:
Now fuck me.

i will penetrate you so deep our balls touch.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:58 AM Reply

That poem didn't even rhyme.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:58 AM Reply

Interesting direction this rap battle has taken. I guess you both win? Good show regardless gents.


It made more sense in my head.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 04:59 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 04:56 AM, CockGobbler wrote:
At 8/10/12 04:55 AM, Cool-Points wrote:
At 8/10/12 04:51 AM, CockGobbler wrote:
Now fuck me.
i will penetrate you so deep our balls touch.
im wet.
on my dick.
I want you to whip me until I scream for my parents while cumming.

gotta go to bed though lets fuck tomorrow.

this is how all rap battles should end.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 07:45 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 07:33 AM, Rummy0 wrote: A that was poem.

Was it?

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 07:46 AM Reply

Could you do it with a friend
Could you do it end to end
Would you do it on a goat
Would you do it with my goat
Would you do it in a tree
Would you do it while I see?


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 07:57 AM Reply

I'm not skilled
In the art of rhyme,
Jesus Christ,
Look at the time!


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 08:02 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 04:58 AM, Neoncouch wrote: That poem didn't even rhyme.

Of course it did! He rhymed time with time.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 08:07 AM Reply

Your poem is bad
Your poem aint cool
Your poem is sad
Your poem is cruel

I just thought
you would want to know
your poem brought
my standards very low

WHATS UP!!!!!

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 08:09 AM Reply

Once in a lifetime,
Spaghetti.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 08:15 AM Reply

At 8/10/12 01:13 AM, DoctorStrongbad wrote: Just a poem I was working on. Figured I share it with NG.

Shouldn't poems be posted to the Writing forum?


At least not a muffin.

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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 10:32 AM Reply

Penises penises for all to see
Penises penises stuck in full tree
Cock and balls produce the cum
your sack, a brain loaded like a gun
Wood and stiffy in a jiffy
hard as rock for hands to rock
a penis is a lovely thing
a mast, a pole, a flowering plant in the middle of spring
tied or rubbed, covered or slipping a penis is perfect in aspects of play
pink or stink or palmed or oral the organ is designed for appeal
under or behind or hidden by leg the shaft is ment for just pleasure
coming out to play, when aroused or time of day
the penis is bolstered by foreplay


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 01:12 PM Reply

At 8/10/12 08:15 AM, doodle-bread14 wrote:
At 8/10/12 01:13 AM, DoctorStrongbad wrote: Just a poem I was working on. Figured I share it with NG.
Shouldn't poems be posted to the Writing forum?

I wrote it for General, and wated to see if they found any meaning in my poem.


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Response to Time Poem Aug. 10th, 2012 @ 05:42 PM Reply

I will have to start on my next poem sooner than I thought.


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