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opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 03:26 AM Reply

can someone please comment on my art and tell me what you think about it? id really love to get scouted and reconized by the new grounds community ! :D


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 04:51 AM Reply

worst shading i have seen in a long time, focus where a light is coming from and make the areas in the dark shaded. just don't go around the black lines with shading. also the lines are wobbly but that's most likely from using a mouse.


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 05:29 AM Reply

Please upload a pic to this thread. Art threads without art are incredibly naff.


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 05:18 PM Reply

At 8/7/12 04:51 AM, LegolaSS wrote: worst shading i have seen in a long time, focus where a light is coming from and make the areas in the dark shaded. just don't go around the black lines with shading. also the lines are wobbly but that's most likely from using a mouse.

thank you i appreciate this, but yes i do use a mouse for right now, im trying to save up for a tablet. you you have any links that can help improve my shadeing?


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 05:20 PM Reply

At 8/7/12 05:29 AM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: Please upload a pic to this thread. Art threads without art are incredibly naff.

im sorry about that , ill post a picture soon


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 05:23 PM Reply

i know this isnt the best picture to upload, but its my most recent.
A few things i already see wrong is the shape of her head and most of the shading . im open to all opinions

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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 07:32 PM Reply

At 8/7/12 05:23 PM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: i know this isnt the best picture to upload, but its my most recent.
A few things i already see wrong is the shape of her head and most of the shading . im open to all opinions

I'm going to be blunt, she has bad proportions and her shading is muddy, here is a link because today I don't feel like getting into in-depth critiquing. I'm sorry.

Link to Shading and Scaled Proportions


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 07:40 PM Reply

At 8/7/12 07:32 PM, Absinthe wrote:
At 8/7/12 05:23 PM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: i know this isnt the best picture to upload, but its my most recent.
A few things i already see wrong is the shape of her head and most of the shading . im open to all opinions
I'm going to be blunt, she has bad proportions and her shading is muddy, here is a link because today I don't feel like getting into in-depth critiquing. I'm sorry.

Link to Shading and Scaled Proportions

thank you for the link and no need to be sorry ill take any form of criticism you can give me i juts want to improve, once again thank you


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 7th, 2012 @ 11:57 PM Reply

At 8/7/12 03:26 AM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: can someone please comment on my art and tell me what you think about it? id really love to get scouted and reconized by the new grounds community ! :D

dude your art is shit! you suck at shadeing and your charictor design is horrifieing you should just quit


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 8th, 2012 @ 12:00 AM Reply

At 8/7/12 11:57 PM, section19 wrote:
At 8/7/12 03:26 AM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: can someone please comment on my art and tell me what you think about it? id really love to get scouted and reconized by the new grounds community ! :D
dude your art is shit! you suck at shadeing and your charictor design is horrifieing you should just quit

whoa whats up with all the hostility ? if you don't like my work just say i need to work on it, don't cus me out. and you might want to learn how to spell before you try to some at somebody like that.


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 8th, 2012 @ 12:02 AM Reply

At 8/7/12 03:26 AM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: can someone please comment on my art and tell me what you think about it? id really love to get scouted and reconized by the new grounds community ! :D

shut the hell up your just mad because you and all of the newgrounds community knows your art sucks and ,nobody wants to take the time to try to help your sorry ass!


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 8th, 2012 @ 01:06 AM Reply

At 8/7/12 05:23 PM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: i know this isnt the best picture to upload, but its my most recent.
A few things i already see wrong is the shape of her head and most of the shading . im open to all opinions

Don't shade with pure black and white. I'm not sure what program you're using but all the decent ones have a lineart tool, even the free ones. Since you only have a mouse you should use that instead to prevent shaky lines.

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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 8th, 2012 @ 01:29 PM Reply

At 8/8/12 01:06 AM, Chidorigan wrote:

Don't shade with pure black and white. I'm not sure what program you're using but all the decent ones have a lineart tool, even the free ones. Since you only have a mouse you should use that instead to prevent shaky lines.

right now i use paint sai but i cant find the right tools


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 8th, 2012 @ 01:49 PM Reply

i think this one is your best piece

this one being your second, your mistake here was making the top of head too flat, try leaving more space for the hair

in hereand here you made faces too roundie (what would only go well with "chibi" like styles), try lowering opacity from the "white reflexes" layer

for the colors and shadows try to figure out where is the light coming from


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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 8th, 2012 @ 02:16 PM Reply

At 8/8/12 01:29 PM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: right now i use paint sai but i cant find the right tools

I know paint tool SAI has a lineart tool, though I don't use it so I'm not sure where the button is. You should look up some tutorials for general use of the program on DA. They have a whole section of paint tool SAI tuts.

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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 8th, 2012 @ 02:42 PM Reply

At 8/8/12 01:29 PM, xXFALLOUTXx1 wrote: right now i use paint sai but i cant find the right tools

i dont make lineart either because i just dont like it, but it might suit you

here, i made you this.

press the button at the right of the "new layer one", that will create a layer in which you can work using vectors (lineart)

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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 14th, 2012 @ 08:01 PM Reply

is not bad, but start using a sheet of paper and give more details to them. when people draw them like that it looks like a noob who just started drawing. hope it helped.

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Response to opinions on my art Aug. 15th, 2012 @ 03:55 AM Reply

Contrary to popular belief, the tools you use doesn't really matter in making good art.


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