At 8/3/12 04:08 PM, Tomsan wrote:
Could use some tips on the eyes. she must look as 'cute' as possible
Yeah, this doesn't look cute at all.
Try a more round head, big whiskers, get rid of the cheek fat lines that are on either side of its mouth. Bigger nose, either a ":3" face, and optional buckteeth below them.
Even for a cute little cartoon, you need to work on the anatomy. The body shape is lumpy, his front legs are two different thicknesses, and his back leg is just a disaster, sorry. The tail, if you're going for cute, should be more of a cloud-like fluffy, not just another sphere. His back leg is lower than his front legs, and he's missing a back leg.
The shading also seems arbitrary, without a real lightsource in mind. If you did a lightsource you were trying to follow, it has been executed badly. Speaking of, he also needs some shadow under him.
Don't forget to use references. Look at patterns and similarities, and use a lot of them to get some inspiration: 1 2 3 4 5