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4.21 / 5.00 14,831 ViewsIt feels silly to submit my art and then submit it again on the forum....but I'm really looking for a place where I can get critique on future projects. I was on deviantart for a while, but never really got the critique I needed. So first I'm going to submit something thats been done for a little while. Its a cover fora comic I'm currently in the midst of doing the pre-pro for. This isnt going to be the final design as things in my story have changed to a point where the cover no longer fits, but I quite enjoyed how the final version of this came out- minus the person. I'm not very good at drawing people. But I'm getting there!
This is a piece I'm looking to get critque on. it's small (I know.) This was using a mouse, so my canvas wasnt as big as I usually make it. Plus I had an issue already (On another site) of someone taking this piece and modifying it for themselves.
It's still a work in progress. I'm planning on having a person walking down the path which is what the dragon is staring at. I'm not feeling the depth or vastness that I really wanted to portray here and I fear it may need to be completely re-vamped. But if anyone had ideas that'd be stellar.
At 7/29/12 04:19 PM, Ahkihoun wrote: This is a piece I'm looking to get critque on. it's small (I know.) This was using a mouse, so my canvas wasnt as big as I usually make it. Plus I had an issue already (On another site) of someone taking this piece and modifying it for themselves.
It's still a work in progress. I'm planning on having a person walking down the path which is what the dragon is staring at. I'm not feeling the depth or vastness that I really wanted to portray here and I fear it may need to be completely re-vamped. But if anyone had ideas that'd be stellar.
Well, I feel like the mountains don't have a very strong silhouette. They're quite a weird shape, but its fantasy so I guess that could be disregarded.
Maybe making the sky less saturated and more foggy lower on the horizon, to match the mountains.
8 Hours. Octo bitch. For a forum post. DPI quality is bad in order to get it to fit. Sorry.
A big thank you to the mod that deleted that forum topic "Red and Wolf" I appreciate it. Heres WIP two of the concept art I'm doing. Left rocks are done now.
Or right rocks for those without dyslexia.
At 8/10/12 11:15 AM, Ahkihoun wrote: Or right rocks for those without dyslexia.
I almost asked! lol - Also, im glad your posting updates on this WIP - I like to see peoples process. Especially from those who actually have one!
At 8/10/12 02:27 PM, pockets08 wrote:At 8/10/12 11:15 AM, Ahkihoun wrote: Or right rocks for those without dyslexia.I almost asked! lol - Also, im glad your posting updates on this WIP - I like to see peoples process. Especially from those who actually have one!
Welll thank you friend. I'll be sure to post more often on these then.
WIP 2
Had some holdup with that mountain, but think I got it almost looking the way i want it.
So sorry for the poor quality...this file is a little big so I had to squish it down for Newgrounds...
WIP 3? 4? HAHAHAHA. Spider work. used some reference photos. still working the anatomy.
At 8/12/12 02:35 PM, Ahkihoun wrote: WIP 3? 4? HAHAHAHA. Spider work. used some reference photos. still working the anatomy.
I had no Idea...that was a spider...lmao. :33
At 8/12/12 02:41 PM, pockets08 wrote:At 8/12/12 02:35 PM, Ahkihoun wrote: WIP 3? 4? HAHAHAHA. Spider work. used some reference photos. still working the anatomy.I had no Idea...that was a spider...lmao. :33
well good, maybe its made the scene more interesting now.
I'm not satisfied with this.
This is an old commission piece I was working on for a client, but I'm disatisfied with the way the characters and background...arn't...jiiving. Any critique? I'm not sure if I'm a fan of my lineart...or maybe its just not pronounced enough? Or perhaps its because its not finished.
I also need to shove another wolf in there. :/ Any suggestions on how to incorporate that would be fantastic.
The piece is up for editing, but the characters can't be used outside of this piece as they do not belong to me.
Pic for a friend. Speed sketch. First time working with these colors together.
At 3/2/13 11:06 PM, Ahkihoun wrote: Pic for a friend. Speed sketch. First time working with these colors together.
This thread needs some more love.
You've got some really good stuff going on in here.
At 3/3/13 12:50 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:At 3/2/13 11:06 PM, Ahkihoun wrote: Pic for a friend. Speed sketch. First time working with these colors together.This thread needs some more love.
You've got some really good stuff going on in here.
Thanks friend! Just got scouted, so hopefully that will help. ;)
Of demons and such. This started off as vent art and turned into something more monolithic. It still looks pretty ugly as I only started going over part of the demon's face, but the end result I have in mind may just be fabulous.
Hooray for large demon creatures standing against the sunlight. That hasnt been done a million times or anything. xDDD haha. But i figured I just had to try my hand at it.
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uggggh. print screen sucks. There. this one is better.