My Art! :3

[Bit-N]

Hi! Well, I would be posting here some of my drawings. I have four small works of art in the portal, but I will not post them here (if you want you can see them in my profile). I also have some in my sketchbook, but my digital camera stopped working, then I must find another method to show them >.< But anyway, let me begin by showing that one I did yesterday.
I would ask their honest opinions and also liked something or not, please, say.

Have a nice day :D
One more thing, I'm Brazilian and I can not speak English very well, then use the google translator. If there are any errors in grammar, sorry XD

[JefferyWolf]

At 7/28/12 09:16 PM, Bit-N wrote:

-long text sorry :P

Have a nice day :D
One more thing, I'm Brazilian and I can not speak English very well, then use the google translator. If there are any errors in grammar, sorry XD

The mustachio looks epix
Once you color it in it's going to look fantastic, epic job.

[bigjonny13]

At 7/28/12 09:16 PM, Bit-N wrote: But anyway, let me begin by showing that one I did yesterday.

For his right hand, it would be better if it came from the wrist more instead of jutting out.

[Bit-N]

Thanks for the replies, even though only two, for me it's too :D
Finally, I painted my previous design, and also made âEU<âEU<a nother (yes it is not the eye, and smile too, but that is when I go to computer, I'll paint it in a special way).
What did you think?

Note: for some reason, I can not post more than one image >.<
<img src="http://i1116.photobucket.com/albums/k576/ReadMew/Digita lizar.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket">

[Bit-N]

Note: his eye is white since I'm going to color it in Photoshop.
Comments?

[razem]

Well done artwork.

[Spags]

At 8/2/12 08:11 PM, razem wrote: Well done artwork.

No, no it's not. Do not listen to this spam-man.

Two things I notice off the bat- Even given your stylised anatomy, the arm holding the sword is far too long. Also, you should work on more confident strokes. Your lines look very jagged like you moved your pen lightly and slowly and slightly carelessly. Get a nice pen and draw with confidence! Eventually your lines will look much better.

[Bit-N]

Thanks for the comments :D Well, I have here some drawings from my sketchbook that I could scan. These are just some drawings I do in my spare time. Comentas?

[Bit-N]

Enemies :D

[Bit-N]

A ghost archer