What do you think.

[HASHITEVO]

How can I improve this? I made this character for my upcoming webseries.
I do have this copyrighted... just pitting that out there.

[DooDooMeaT]

At 7/28/12 01:34 PM, HASHITEVO wrote: How can I improve this? I made this character for my upcoming webseries.
I do have this copyrighted... just pitting that out there.

well.... the black lines on his pants don't really go with the rest of the image. maybe a darker blue color would look better....??

hmm... you copyrighted this drawing??

[Dmoney393]

At 7/28/12 02:31 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote:

At 7/28/12 01:34 PM, HASHITEVO wrote: How can I improve this? I made this character for my upcoming webseries.
I do have this copyrighted... just pitting that out there.

well.... the black lines on his pants don't really go with the rest of the image. maybe a darker blue color would look better....??

hmm... you copyrighted this drawing??

He did say it was for his webseries so he probably means he copyrighted the character design

[PMMurphy]

I agree the thick lines in the pants are really distracting, if you do what somone suggested and tone them down as simply shadows and not outlines it might work.

[Tomsan]

At 7/28/12 01:34 PM, HASHITEVO wrote: How can I improve this? I made this character for my upcoming webseries.
I do have this copyrighted... just pitting that out there.

IF this is the background youre gonna use I would give it a small stroke, just to avoid the blending of the hair and shirt. I too agree with the pants lines comments, and I would try to do something about the shoes.

[Kashi]

At 7/28/12 07:37 PM, PMMurphy wrote: I agree the thick lines in the pants are really distracting, if you do what somone suggested and tone them down as simply shadows and not outlines it might work.

^This, or maybe just use a darker blue instead of black for the lines. It will probably still look out of place, but it's worth a shot. :S