Animation test

[MistyEntertainment]

Here's an animation test I've been working on, took about 4 hours to animate. Constructive criticism is always appreciated. http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/c6e7bb41f53fce3cd26ca44d 723a012b

[Ghombeat]

At 7/27/12 01:27 PM, MistyEntertainment wrote: Here's an animation test I've been working on, took about 4 hours to animate. Constructive criticism is always appreciated. http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/c6e7bb41f53fce3cd26ca44d 723a012b

the arms and the movements are a bit strange, also the buttons of his jacket are missing in the frames where he fight that ghost-mage thingies (also you forgot to color his arms and leg in the last frames, lol), anyway you made that in four hours, so good job.

[nat29]

Tumbleweed not rolling, just bouncing up and down. Actually make it rotate and have more smooth like this:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/38efb72fde46d85c421fdb27 355152a2

And the clouds at the end, make them move.

[EthanAlways]

Yeah I'd say the arms. Your character seems like he has no elbows so he has to swing them in one direction. Also the lightning bolt could be drawn better.

[veselekov]

Lightning bolt was bad. Try using a 50% opacity on it?

[Pegosho]

Add an "anticipation", like, when you throw a punch you have to charge it by leaning back a little and then BANG!
Also, the background's outlines should be thinner and not that black, plus add a blur effect so that the characters can stand out more.