At 7/28/12 01:21 AM, Kashi wrote:
You're being horribly vague. What fundamentals is he ignoring that you think he has to learn/improve on?
Ok, ill name a few.
form, value, texture, composition.
For texture, i dont really get a sense of any. Where is it?
form, your forms look like its stylized but since i see the same kind of forms over and over again and how most of the picture looks flat i think you skipped the lessons of form.
value, i see the same value tones or similair values in your pieces in overal. If you have greys everything is grey, where you have black and white there is no mid tone grey. I dont see a good balance or oganisation of tones or even an attempt to do so.
composition. There is very few areas of rest in your pieces. All because its clusterfuck art doesn't mean it has to be chaotic, you can organise things and learn how to make it calmed down by planning our values or where you put the objects on the paper.
here is an artist who i think this style looks similair to that i think its VERY talented.http://pdclark.deviantart.com/