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Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 25th, 2012 @ 09:41 AM Reply

Hi, I'm a bit new to this forum.
I'd like to upload some of my drawings here so I can here your opinions and critique :).

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 25th, 2012 @ 10:48 AM Reply

Good start with figure studies. Keep doing them and you will improve

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 25th, 2012 @ 10:53 AM Reply

With a name like Mr Fap, I was expecting straight up porn art lol.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 25th, 2012 @ 11:59 AM Reply

At 7/25/12 10:53 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: With a name like Mr Fap, I was expecting straight up porn art lol.

Well, I guess you noticed that the two girls had their breasts means that out, huh?

As for his art, I like the colors you used. This style of layout is a little overused in most designs shown here. But is the size of your talent that will change this. Good work. Let's see how will your next project...


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 25th, 2012 @ 12:19 PM Reply

At 7/25/12 10:53 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: With a name like Mr Fap, I was expecting straight up porn art lol.

HENTAI FTW! But seriously though Mr. Fap, it looks good what you have so far. Like PMMurphy was saying, just keep up what you're doing and you'll only keep getting better. It's not bad what you have, but it seems a little sketched out right now (rough). Maybe it's a work in progress? Even if it is... it is still really good for a figure drawing. The woman on the right however looks a bit plump wouldn't you agree? It looks like she's packing a little bit extra in the stomach. It gives her almost a cartoonistic nature, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. As for the woman on the left she looks very good. Not in the hentai sense (lol), but in the drawing itself. The only thing I see room for improvement in this one is the dress flowing. It looks alright right now, but it seem a bit flat. Those are the only ways I can see you keeping an eye out for in later works, but once again... just keep at it! That's all you can do!

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 25th, 2012 @ 02:58 PM Reply

At 7/25/12 09:41 AM, MrFap wrote: Hi, I'm a bit new to this forum.
I'd like to upload some of my drawings here so I can here your opinions and critique :).

i've noticed that the girl on the right seems pregnant perhaps? but her legs seem to be a little on the short side compared to her torso( if it they were not intended to be drawn that way). Keep practicing, and keep posting! also Welcome to the Art Forum.


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 26th, 2012 @ 01:46 AM Reply

At 7/25/12 02:58 PM, Ramatsu wrote:
At 7/25/12 09:41 AM, MrFap wrote: Hi, I'm a bit new to this forum.
I'd like to upload some of my drawings here so I can here your opinions and critique :).
i've noticed that the girl on the right seems pregnant perhaps? but her legs seem to be a little on the short side compared to her torso( if it they were not intended to be drawn that way).

Yes, I wouldn't have noticed it if you hadn't sad it, the legs on the right one do seem short. I did that one without a reference (she's not supposed to look pregnant btw, that's just bad shading :p)

Thanks for all the replies. Who would have known half naked ladies upheld such interest on an art forum ;p.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 26th, 2012 @ 02:06 AM Reply

At 7/26/12 01:46 AM, MrFap wrote: Thanks for all the replies. Who would have known half naked ladies upheld such interest on an art forum ;p.

This may interest you:
Tutorial on bewbs!
Yours seem to have that 'solid object' look to them, as though they're inflatable balloons.


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 26th, 2012 @ 03:02 AM Reply

At 7/26/12 02:06 AM, Wivernryder wrote:
At 7/26/12 01:46 AM, MrFap wrote: Thanks for all the replies. Who would have known half naked ladies upheld such interest on an art forum ;p.
This may interest you:
Tutorial on bewbs!
Yours seem to have that 'solid object' look to them, as though they're inflatable balloons.

Thanks for the tutorial. It's sort of an odd angle to draw boobs in, I tried to fix it a little in Photoshop.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 26th, 2012 @ 07:09 AM Reply

At 7/25/12 09:41 AM, MrFap wrote: Hi, I'm a bit new to this forum.
I'd like to upload some of my drawings here so I can here your opinions and critique :).

your figuurs are decent but try something white the faces
and keep your skechts bit clean

keep it up!

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 26th, 2012 @ 03:52 PM Reply

your figuurs are decent but try something white the faces
and keep your skechts bit clean

keep it up!

Thanks, I'll have to practice on drawing faces. I've got the tendency to draw them as vague as possible.

Here's another one. The lower right arm looks a bit small, that's the curse of drawing with colored pencils, no erasing possible. It's fun to draw in color though.
Most of these drawings are one a large A3 where I recycle any bit of space, that might explain the messiness of some of these drawings.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 27th, 2012 @ 11:49 AM Reply

Not bad, this was also good. But if I saw good, I think there is a chest that is larger than the other. I think it's just my vision through horrible, lol. Good job.


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 27th, 2012 @ 04:41 PM Reply

At 7/27/12 11:49 AM, Bit-N wrote: Not bad, this was also good. But if I saw good, I think there is a chest that is larger than the other. I think it's just my vision through horrible, lol. Good job.

She has two chests O_o !?

You mean't breasts right ;) ?
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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 27th, 2012 @ 04:52 PM Reply

At 7/26/12 02:06 AM, Wivernryder wrote: Tutorial on bewbs!

Why haven't you ever shown me this, Wiv?
I thought we were friends!!! >:'C

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 28th, 2012 @ 06:05 PM Reply

At 7/27/12 04:41 PM, MrFap wrote: She has two chests O_o !?

Sorry, this translator is crap. I meant two nipples or something.


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Jul. 31st, 2012 @ 11:29 PM Reply

New drawing. I feel that there is something wrong about it but can't seem to figure out exactly what.
So any help is welcome :)
I'd like to fix whatever's making it look off before I go trough the trouble of coloring it.
Suggestions on color are also welcome.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Aug. 1st, 2012 @ 03:02 PM Reply

legs, your characters have too short legs, they should be half of the total stature to a regular character, and a bit more for a stylized one


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Aug. 2nd, 2012 @ 02:50 PM Reply

At 7/27/12 11:49 AM, Bit-N wrote: Not bad, this was also good. But if I saw good, I think there is a chest that is larger than the other. I think it's just my vision through horrible, lol. Good job.

cool

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Aug. 2nd, 2012 @ 05:36 PM Reply

At 8/1/12 03:02 PM, kakalxlax wrote: legs, your characters have too short legs, they should be half of the total stature to a regular character, and a bit more for a stylized one

Thanks, I'll pay attention to that. There's not much legs on this one though.

Here's the last drawing in color.
I tried to fix what was bugging me by making the neck shorter 'n stuff but I'm still not happy about it.
Also, redhead.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Aug. 2nd, 2012 @ 05:44 PM Reply

Learn anatomy.


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Aug. 2nd, 2012 @ 06:17 PM Reply

At 8/2/12 05:36 PM, MrFap wrote:
At 8/1/12 03:02 PM, kakalxlax wrote: legs, your characters have too short legs, they should be half of the total stature to a regular character, and a bit more for a stylized one
Thanks, I'll pay attention to that. There's not much legs on this one though.

Here's the last drawing in color.
I tried to fix what was bugging me by making the neck shorter 'n stuff but I'm still not happy about it.
Also, redhead.

dude the few first pics are older one's im i right?
becaus your new pic is beter thats bit wierd for 8 days from your pervous post its a big improvement.
you have collor and a face now.
why didt upload those first dude.

no hating just saying.
but the new pic is decent
keep it up!

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Aug. 2nd, 2012 @ 07:42 PM Reply

At 8/2/12 05:36 PM, MrFap wrote:
Also, redhead.

great improvement, but it would look even better of you center the boobs and reduce legs thickness a bit

gingers always makes things better


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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 1st, 2012 @ 02:52 PM Reply

I've downloaded scuptris, a superb 3d sculpting program, a while ago.
After messing around a little and then messing around some more, I made these.

deamon
Massively Gigantic Penis

3D modelling is a great way to learn about anatomy without having to worry about perspective to much.
(It's free software so anyone can try it)

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 1st, 2012 @ 02:54 PM Reply

ps: how do you embed art portal submissions in a forum post?

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 1st, 2012 @ 05:56 PM Reply

At 9/1/12 02:54 PM, MrFap wrote: ps: how do you embed art portal submissions in a forum post?

Just post the actual link in the post, and it will auto-embed.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 3rd, 2012 @ 11:52 AM Reply

WIP

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 3rd, 2012 @ 02:05 PM Reply

At 9/3/12 11:52 AM, MrFap wrote: WIP

It looks like that Caterpillar off that...cartoon...fuck! I can't remember what it's called :[
But he gets tiny wings as a butterfly :3
Oh damn....Anyone know what i'm talking about?

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 3rd, 2012 @ 02:10 PM Reply

At 9/3/12 02:05 PM, BeckyRawr wrote:
At 9/3/12 11:52 AM, MrFap wrote: WIP
It looks like that Caterpillar off that...cartoon...fuck! I can't remember what it's called :[
But he gets tiny wings as a butterfly :3
Oh damn....Anyone know what i'm talking about?

You're thinking of A Bug's Life. I thought the same thing.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 3rd, 2012 @ 02:11 PM Reply

At 9/3/12 02:05 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: It looks like that Caterpillar off that...cartoon...fuck! I can't remember what it's called :[
But he gets tiny wings as a butterfly :3
Oh damn....Anyone know what i'm talking about?

A Bug's Life, the pixar movie.

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Response to Mr fap's art tread (a little nsfw) Sep. 3rd, 2012 @ 05:04 PM Reply

At 9/3/12 02:11 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 9/3/12 02:05 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: It looks like that Caterpillar off that...cartoon...fuck! I can't remember what it's called :[
But he gets tiny wings as a butterfly :3
Oh damn....Anyone know what i'm talking about?
A Bug's Life, the pixar movie.

I Googled it. It does have it's similarities, though I actually had more of an Alice in wonderland thing in mind when I made it.

Here's the finished piece:
(the background in painted in Photoshop)

  • High on life
    High on life by MrFap

    Someday he'll be a butterfly.

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