At 7/25/12 10:53 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
With a name like Mr Fap, I was expecting straight up porn art lol.
HENTAI FTW! But seriously though Mr. Fap, it looks good what you have so far. Like PMMurphy was saying, just keep up what you're doing and you'll only keep getting better. It's not bad what you have, but it seems a little sketched out right now (rough). Maybe it's a work in progress? Even if it is... it is still really good for a figure drawing. The woman on the right however looks a bit plump wouldn't you agree? It looks like she's packing a little bit extra in the stomach. It gives her almost a cartoonistic nature, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. As for the woman on the left she looks very good. Not in the hentai sense (lol), but in the drawing itself. The only thing I see room for improvement in this one is the dress flowing. It looks alright right now, but it seem a bit flat. Those are the only ways I can see you keeping an eye out for in later works, but once again... just keep at it! That's all you can do!