Super Kawaii Thoughts?

[veselekov]

Hey art portal. Would you guys give me some direction to go with this art? Some honest opinions would be great.
Don't be affraid to feel like your being mean or anything. It is what I need to become a better artist (;
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[RAMB0J3SUS]

It's not bad! I like the cartoony style of it, but it is manga isn't it? (lol) I'm not sure what Kawaii as, but for a picture it's pretty good. My favorite one is on the far left with the :3 face. Now as for the guy next to her, I'm not sure what he's doing, but it adds a nice touch to it. Now for my real problem... They all seem very boyish. I can't tell if they're supposed to be girls or not. The two girls on the right have sort of a man physique. For the one on the far right, her face looks like that of a dude. As for the ninja below her, her calves look big and man like. It could just be me though, UNLESS they are all supposed to be dudes and the guy with Smith tattooed on his arm is getting into character to help fight crime with them. But for some reason I don't think that's it. Otherwise I think it's a pretty good drawing!

[veselekov]

At 7/22/12 09:12 PM, RAMB0J3SUS wrote: It's not bad! I like the cartoony style of it, but it is manga isn't it? (lol)

I have no idea. My art style is a mix of manga and realism I guess. I would like to say it is unique. But I am no the one who decides that I guess.

I'm not sure what Kawaii as, but for a picture it's pretty good.

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  Kawaii Battle Stars by AxelTheNavy

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Thenks!

:Now for my real problem...

:They all seem very boyish.
:The two girls on the right have sort of a man physique.

I agree with a second glance I can definately agree.

Thanks for the honest feedback man. I really appreciate it.

[Absinthe]

Ew Spazkid, anyway as for your first picture the composition has a lot of negative space, don't be afraid to push characters together. There just seems to be a lack of harmony.

[veselekov]

At 7/23/12 12:17 AM, monndoggy wrote: Ew Spazkid,

*Axel, Spaz kid is credited at doing the editing or production. Not the writing etc.

anyway as for your first picture the composition has a lot of negative space, don't be afraid to push characters together. There just seems to be a lack of harmony.

Good point. I can already see it looking more like a movie poster with the characters closer together. C: