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Help me find my mistakes.

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Help me find my mistakes. 2012-07-11 18:09:24


Hi everyone, I think I should post my drawings so the artist in newgrounds could tell me when something is wrong.
This is Cpt. Falcon by the way, This was colored, with color pencils.

Help me find my mistakes.


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Response to Help me find my mistakes. 2012-07-11 18:31:42


Only after squinting at the helmet, I just noticed you used a really dark shade that appears to have thrown off the perspective of the helmet. Perhaps toss in a reflective light in the shadow?

At 7/11/12 06:09 PM, GoodFang wrote: Hi everyone, I think I should post my drawings so the artist in newgrounds could tell me when something is wrong.
This is Cpt. Falcon by the way, This was colored, with color pencils.

Help me find my mistakes.


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Response to Help me find my mistakes. 2012-07-11 21:07:28


At 7/11/12 06:31 PM, maficmelody wrote: Only after squinting at the helmet, I just noticed you used a really dark shade that appears to have thrown off the perspective of the helmet. Perhaps toss in a reflective light in the shadow?

At 7/11/12 06:09 PM, GoodFang wrote: Hi everyone, I think I should post my drawings so the artist in newgrounds could tell me when something is wrong.
This is Cpt. Falcon by the way, This was colored, with color pencils.

Yes I like to shade a lot with ink but I made up there, so it made it look like the left part of the visor is bigger.


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Response to Help me find my mistakes. 2012-07-11 22:18:48


messed up* not made up


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Response to Help me find my mistakes. 2012-07-12 05:30:18


At 7/11/12 06:09 PM, GoodFang wrote: Hi everyone, I think I should post my drawings so the artist in newgrounds could tell me when something is wrong.
This is Cpt. Falcon by the way, This was colored, with color pencils.

it would help if you got some better pics of it.
Besides that it seems a bit sloppy; but that could be the photo. furthermore his right lower arm seems to be a bit short (i.e. get thin too quickly)


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Response to Help me find my mistakes. 2012-07-13 05:16:40


I agree with the more pics thing, but it being sloppy is an opinion that I disagree with. I think that it looks very graphic and I like graphic.

At 7/12/12 05:30 AM, J-qb wrote:
At 7/11/12 06:09 PM, GoodFang wrote: Hi everyone, I think I should post my drawings so the artist in newgrounds could tell me when something is wrong.
This is Cpt. Falcon by the way, This was colored, with color pencils.
it would help if you got some better pics of it.
Besides that it seems a bit sloppy; but that could be the photo. furthermore his right lower arm seems to be a bit short (i.e. get thin too quickly)

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