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[NEOvivid]

How do you feel about this style of drawing???

[ReNaeNae]

At 7/11/12 03:14 AM, NEOvivid wrote: How do you feel about this style of drawing???

Is it your drawing?

[NEOvivid]

Yes.

[ornery]

Is it finished? What exactly do you mean by style? Do you mean line work? Loose animeish stuff? Unfinished looking pieces? Highly centered compositions? Portraits? All of the above? None of the above?

Post more work, its hard to discern a "style" from just one piece.

[J-qb]

At 7/11/12 03:14 AM, NEOvivid wrote: How do you feel about this style of drawing???

I'd stay away from mirroring faces; it's fine if you just mirror the sketch, but you're gonna want to have differences between the left and right half. other than that: what ornery said.
It looks like it could make for an interesting portrait; but I wouldn't say it's finished

[NEOvivid]

Yeah, it's definitely not finished. It's a sketch. I was asking how does the line work along with shapes and proportions of the face look.

At 7/11/12 09:23 AM, J-qb wrote:

At 7/11/12 03:14 AM, NEOvivid wrote: How do you feel about this style of drawing???

I'd stay away from mirroring faces; it's fine if you just mirror the sketch, but you're gonna want to have differences between the left and right half. other than that: what ornery said.
It looks like it could make for an interesting portrait; but I wouldn't say it's finished

[DoctorStrongbad]

It is a nice sketch. Keep going and complete it.

[Kashi]

The nose looks too small/high up on her face.

[PatBest22]

At 7/11/12 03:33 PM, Kashi wrote: The nose looks too small/high up on her face.

YES! THAT'S WHAT'S BUGGING ME! I kept looking at the chin thinking it looked too big and yet it wasn't wrong, but now that you've pointed out the nose I see why it looks wrong.

[NEOvivid]

I agree. I was supost to fix that.

At 7/11/12 03:33 PM, Kashi wrote: The nose looks too small/high up on her face.

[maficmelody]

This could be a conflicting style thing, but I think the hood is a tad too poofy. It feels.. lacking in gravity. Or she's hiding a massive head of hair.

At 7/11/12 02:38 PM, NEOvivid wrote: Yeah, it's definitely not finished. It's a sketch. I was asking how does the line work along with shapes and proportions of the face look.

At 7/11/12 09:23 AM, J-qb wrote:

At 7/11/12 03:14 AM, NEOvivid wrote: How do you feel about this style of drawing???

I'd stay away from mirroring faces; it's fine if you just mirror the sketch, but you're gonna want to have differences between the left and right half. other than that: what ornery said.
It looks like it could make for an interesting portrait; but I wouldn't say it's finished

[sweet21]

i care.

[Lucky]

At 7/11/12 05:54 PM, maficmelody wrote: This could be a conflicting style thing, but I think the hood is a tad too poofy. It feels.. lacking in gravity. Or she's hiding a massive head of hair.

It looks like it could make for an interesting portrait; but I wouldn't say it's finished

no offense, but the original looks better than your fix, the lips and nose arent flat and the eye isnt on that odd tilted angle

with that said I don't believe the artist drew this drawing since he doesnt want to submit more art and his profile being a livetraced photo. But if you post more art I'll believe ya

[NEOvivid]

It's not a hood, it's a space helment. Like in the movive Prometheus.

At 7/11/12 05:54 PM, maficmelody wrote: This could be a conflicting style thing, but I think the hood is a tad too poofy. It feels.. lacking in gravity. Or she's hiding a massive head of hair.

[NEOvivid]

Ok. I did this one piece because I'm trying a new style, but I'm going to upload some more of my quick sketches for you.

with that said I don't believe the artist drew this drawing since he doesnt want to submit more art and his profile being a livetraced photo. But if you post more art I'll believe ya

[NEOvivid]

This one is from my sketchbook.

At 7/11/12 07:51 PM, NEOvivid wrote: Ok. I did this one piece because I'm trying a new style, but I'm going to upload some more of my quick sketches for you.

with that said I don't believe the artist drew this drawing since he doesnt want to submit more art and his profile being a livetraced photo. But if you post more art I'll believe ya

[test-object]

At 7/11/12 05:54 PM, maficmelody wrote: This could be a conflicting style thing, but I think the hood is a tad too poofy. It feels.. lacking in gravity. Or she's hiding a massive head of hair.

To be fair, despite lazily being mirrored, the original looked better and had more character and the proportions of her face are really not THAT far off for an average woman.

[ReNaeNae]

What program are you using? Sorry if you already mentioned it and I missed it.

[NEOvivid]

The first two sketches were done in krita 2.4. The third one is from my sketch book.

At 7/11/12 08:32 PM, ReNaeNae wrote: What program are you using? Sorry if you already mentioned it and I missed it.

[sweet21]

Your sketchbook is mosaic?

[bigjonny13]

Wait, was his last thread deleted? Because I know I saw that "sketchbook" picture before.

[NEOvivid]

Yeah, this is my new newgrounds account.

At 7/11/12 11:55 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Wait, was his last thread deleted? Because I know I saw that "sketchbook" picture before.

[NEOvivid]

(If your referring to the somewhat digital look) It's because I sharpened it. I have a bad camera.

At 7/11/12 11:24 PM, sweet21 wrote: Your sketchbook is mosaic?

[Lucky]

At 7/11/12 08:21 PM, test-object wrote:

At 7/11/12 05:54 PM, maficmelody wrote: This could be a conflicting style thing, but I think the hood is a tad too poofy. It feels.. lacking in gravity. Or she's hiding a massive head of hair.

To be fair, despite lazily being mirrored, the original looked better and had more character and the proportions of her face are really not THAT far off for an average woman.

ok sweet I was wrong, I like your sketches quite a lot! Did you post the realistic photo looking stuff before, because ive seen that last picture on here before... Post more sketches, the line quality in them is all lovely!

[Cope2K]

I really wish you wouldn't mirror these....I'd love to see how you'd do the sketch with out it being mirrored. Do at least one of these new style sketches that isn't mirrored.

[sweet21]

At 7/12/12 12:30 AM, Cope2K wrote: I really wish you wouldn't mirror these....I'd love to see how you'd do the sketch with out it being mirrored. Do at least one of these new style sketches that isn't mirrored.

Mirrored? My god your right! I didn't notice before but your right! BLASPHEMY!

[NEOvivid]

That's man. I'm a traditional artist, but I just started doing things digital. I'm thinking about puting my traditional stuff all on an art fourm post and my finished digital stuff in the portal when I get scouted. I'm doing four new digital paintings just for my newgrounds profile.

At 7/12/12 12:13 AM, Lucky wrote:

At 7/11/12 08:21 PM, test-object wrote:

At 7/11/12 05:54 PM, maficmelody wrote: This could be a conflicting style thing, but I think the hood is a tad too poofy. It feels.. lacking in gravity. Or she's hiding a massive head of hair.

To be fair, despite lazily being mirrored, the original looked better and had more character and the proportions of her face are really not THAT far off for an average woman.

ok sweet I was wrong, I like your sketches quite a lot! Did you post the realistic photo looking stuff before, because ive seen that last picture on here before... Post more sketches, the line quality in them is all lovely!

[NEOvivid]

Thanks man.

[ImpendingRiot]

At 7/11/12 11:55 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Wait, was his last thread deleted? Because I know I saw that "sketchbook" picture before.

He's Mindcraft93. http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1310697

[NEOvivid]

My last Picture is not mirrored since it's from my sketchbook, but I can upload a sketchbook picture if you like?

At 7/12/12 12:30 AM, Cope2K wrote: I really wish you wouldn't mirror these....I'd love to see how you'd do the sketch with out it being mirrored. Do at least one of these new style sketches that isn't mirrored.