Please View and Critique

[shadowhuntress13]

This was an experiment dealing with background and a pose. Please let me know what I did good and what I can improve on. Please don't troll.
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/shadowhuntress13/wood-elf-2?context=ratings:etm.user:40 49810.scouted:.offset:5

[shadowhuntress13]

Oh, forgot to mention: Please take a look at my small gallery and let me know how I can improve on my work. Be warned I have a hentai in there marked Adult.

[PMMurphy]

Hey i checked your stuff out. Seems really nice. I dont know anything about the cartoon/anime style so im going to leave critiques for someone else. But it would be nice if you uploaded your inages to this thread instead of posting links and having us search your gallery.

I understand your from DeviantART but things are tad bit different here. Its easier to view thumbnails but there are no thumbnails on ng. So just upload your stuff to your art thread and let us have a go!!!!!

[Generations1st]

At 6/20/12 10:16 PM, shadowhuntress13 wrote: This was an experiment dealing with background and a pose. Please let me know what I did good and what I can improve on. Please don't troll.
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/shadowhuntress13/wood-elf -2?context=ratings:etm.user:40 49810.scouted:.offset:5

Your Zelda Comic Sketch is cute, i was always a sucker for romantic graphic novels..
Call it "guilty pleasure" if you must..

[M-Maher]

At 6/20/12 10:16 PM, shadowhuntress13 wrote: Please don't troll.

well exuuuuuuuse me princess

[shadowhuntress13]

ok, hopefully this post works. Tell me what you guys think.

[shadowhuntress13]

it looks extremely flat and the texture for the clothes isn't doing it any favors either. Use less hard lines for shadows and use soft to mid-hard lines. like 0-90% in hardness for your brush.

K. I'll take that into account. My shading and lines still need work. ^^;

[shadowhuntress13]

This is a piece I just finished. It's lineart this time because I didn't want to color it. I used a softer line setting on photoshop. Let me know how I can improve since I don't really draw chibi's often.