I'd Love some feedback on my Art

[randallpstudios]

I started a daily sketch blog called Randall P's Daily Sketch
I haven't really gotten any response on there so I figured I'd try to get a response on here for my art work. I'd love to hear anyone's comments (either good or bad)
Thanx,
Randall P

[M-Maher]

At 6/19/12 03:10 AM, randallpstudios wrote: I started a daily sketch blog called Randall P's Daily Sketch
I haven't really gotten any response on there so I figured I'd try to get a response on here for my art work. I'd love to hear anyone's comments (either good or bad)
Thanx,
Randall P

nothing too amazing, seems a little bland, boring, not much to care about, it just doesn't impress me, that's not to say its bad, by all means its decent enough, it just lacks a wow factor.

[Aigis]

At 6/19/12 06:12 AM, M-Maher wrote: nothing too amazing, seems a little bland, boring, not much to care about, it just doesn't impress me ... it just lacks a wow factor.

Ran out of synonyms in your thesaurus, Maher?

[M-Maher]

At 6/19/12 06:19 AM, Aigis wrote:

At 6/19/12 06:12 AM, M-Maher wrote: nothing too amazing, seems a little bland, boring, not much to care about, it just doesn't impress me ... it just lacks a wow factor.

Ran out of synonyms in your thesaurus, Maher?

oh sorry let me re-phrase that in a more verbose manner;
The awesome appearance of said drawing is lacking to say the least, indeed it can claim its right to being mediocre, however, It most certainly cannot access the splendor that other drawings emit freely, It simply resonates no effect on me.......It does not do, what other works do, It does not flabbergast me with intrigue and emotion, it does not stupefy me, It is there, not something to be payed attention to but to be ignored.

[Aigis]

At 6/19/12 07:19 AM, M-Maher wrote: oh sorry let me re-phrase that in a more verbose manner;

Your verbosity was what I was criticising in the first place.

[M-Maher]

At 6/19/12 07:47 AM, Aigis wrote:

At 6/19/12 07:19 AM, M-Maher wrote: oh sorry let me re-phrase that in a more verbose manner;

Your verbosity was what I was criticising in the first place.

Well played old chap, well played.

[randallpstudios]

At 6/19/12 06:12 AM, M-Maher wrote:

At 6/19/12 03:10 AM, randallpstudios wrote: I started a daily sketch blog called Randall P's Daily Sketch
I haven't really gotten any response on there so I figured I'd try to get a response on here for my art work. I'd love to hear anyone's comments (either good or bad)
Thanx,
Randall P

nothing too amazing, seems a little bland, boring, not much to care about, it just doesn't impress me, that's not to say its bad, by all means its decent enough, it just lacks a wow factor.

Well thank you for that comment. I appreciate it. Did you check out the other drawings are just this one?

[M-Maher]

At 6/19/12 02:08 PM, randallpstudios wrote:
Well thank you for that comment. I appreciate it. Did you check out the other drawings are just this one?

Yes I like the robot one but that's simply due to my intrigue and fascination with mechanical machines, If I wanted to criticize your style I'd say this: theres too many cross hatched lines where cross hatching isn't needed, try to vary pressure with your pen, I like to lightly press down and flick a line on the page, adds a more softer effect to the piece try to make it blended and more of a gradient, or you'll do a Liefeld.

[DrawFall]

You have cool subject matter, I'm digging the robots and creatures. Maybe when you do stuff with typography or text you could keep a cleaner edge?

[randallpstudios]

At 6/19/12 05:12 PM, DrawFall wrote: You have cool subject matter, I'm digging the robots and creatures. Maybe when you do stuff with typography or text you could keep a cleaner edge?

Thank you! :o) Which one were you talking about with typography?

[DrawFall]

At 6/19/12 06:26 PM, randallpstudios wrote:

At 6/19/12 05:12 PM, DrawFall wrote: You have cool subject matter, I'm digging the robots and creatures. Maybe when you do stuff with typography or text you could keep a cleaner edge?

Thank you! :o) Which one were you talking about with typography?

I was referring to the one "Philosophy of Death" on the blog you provided.

[randallpstudios]

At 6/19/12 06:35 PM, DrawFall wrote:

At 6/19/12 06:26 PM, randallpstudios wrote:

At 6/19/12 05:12 PM, DrawFall wrote: You have cool subject matter, I'm digging the robots and creatures. Maybe when you do stuff with typography or text you could keep a cleaner edge?

Thank you! :o) Which one were you talking about with typography?

I was referring to the one "Philosophy of Death" on the blog you provided.

Oh yes, I was very unhappy with that one. It was just a quick sketch. Even in my blog i mentioned how I didn't much care for it. But yes, i think the typography has a lot to do with why I don't like it. That and the white background

[shadowhuntress13]

It's pretty good for a sketch. I like the expressions. This would look alot better after you clean up the lines a bit.

[randallpstudios]

At 6/20/12 09:23 PM, shadowhuntress13 wrote: It's pretty good for a sketch. I like the expressions. This would look alot better after you clean up the lines a bit.

Thank you. I really appreciate that. I actually prefer the skribble look, i like them to look a little rough vs clean.