Character critic

[Leonworx]

This is a character in mind to my first flash animation. I still don't have a name for him thou. Please feel free to criticize. Thanks! :)

[Lintire]

At 6/18/12 10:15 AM, Leonworx wrote: This is a character in mind to my first flash animation. I still don't have a name for him thou. Please feel free to criticize. Thanks! :)

He's missing a fist right in the middle of his fucking face.

[lovingthedark]

At 6/18/12 09:33 PM, Lintire wrote: He's missing a fist right in the middle of his fucking face.

*nose

[Aigis]

Why has he got a penis for a hand?

[thepixelizer]

At 6/18/12 10:15 AM, Leonworx wrote: This is a character in mind to my first flash animation. I still don't have a name for him thou. Please feel free to criticize. Thanks! :)

He's pretty apealing and simple to draw, (two very important things) his face reminds me a lot of Phil's from the RugRats. I agree with the other guy his hand could use some fixing,make the middle knuckle less bulb like.

If you want a name you could call him Travis.

[M-Maher]

At 6/18/12 10:15 AM, Leonworx wrote: This is a character in mind to my first flash animation. I still don't have a name for him thou. Please feel free to criticize. Thanks! :)

It's okay practically but I can hardly identify much artistic value in it, things aren't exactly clear on what they are the shading is that cell shading bullshit, (not that there's anything universally wrong cell shading I just have a personal hatred for cell shading). The head is deformed and not in a stylistically pleasing way at all, reminds me of the 90s to early 2000's "ugly cartoon" genre, and you signed it, which is a cliche that all bad artists do.

The design is just boring, the linework is clumsy, the coloring does nothing and the whole thing looks 2-D.