Animator needed.

[Jayandjay]

Hello I am a writer/voice actor. I'm in need of an animator to help me with the pilot of a 3 episode idea I made.
Here's a very quickly and shitaly typed snip it from the script.
Intro:(bong sound's and random non-understandable talking)
Story Line: The two friend's Jay(me) and (needed role) are playing xbox while smoking from a bong.
Jay discover's that they are smoking their last bowl.
Jay turn's to his friend and say's "Shit man, we are out of that good stuff.".
Jay and the friend sit and think about what to do.
(needed role) reply's "We can go to the patch growing in the wood's."
(screen change) the two boy's are now dressed in hoodie's and sweat's.
(HERES AN OVER USED STORY TWIST)
The two boy's walk outside their house and to the car.
They enter the car and drive through the city heading to the wood's.
The boy's find the city empty of people and drive around looking for any sign's of life.
They find a grey colored man covered in blood limping on the sidewalk.
The boy's so stoned that they don't know any better get out of the car and try to talk to the man.
The man keep's walking only to find a random person walking on the side walk.
The boy's look at the man as he aproaches the person.
The man the attack's the random patren biteing his neck and eating him.
Jay reply's to the situation saying "HOLY SHIT, HE JUST BIT OFF PART OF THAT GUYS NECK."
(needed role) reply's "Oh crap run for it."
The boy's enter the car and take off only to run into a swarm of zombie's.
They drive through them mowing down the living dead.
After clearing the swarm of zombie's the car,
now covered in blood and dented up drive's for only another 100 feet before the engine blow's up.
The boy's find themselves stranded in the middle of the city and get out of the car.
Jay say's "Well what do we do now?", (needed role) reply's "I don't know, let's go look for surviver's."
The boy's now sober walk around searching for any signs of life, they stumble across two girl's hiding in a store.
The boy's decide to help the girl's, and grab backpacks they fill them with food and water.
The boy's then grab a few gun's from the hunting isle, and plenty of ammo.
They leave the back pack's and other item's with the girl's and go to get a few more supply's
(4 hand guns, two gas can's, and for some reason a guitar.)
The boy's return only to find the girls are gone and the floor has been spatered with blood.
The boy's load the hand gun's and look around for the girl's.
To the boy's relief they find the girl's pulling a dead zombie away from the food and supply's.
(just a small part of the first 3-5 minute episode.)

[ClSanders]

Aye guy to be honest with you this is pretty bad! But don't be discouraged, 'cause even if it were remotely passable, this is still the wrong place to ask... UNLE$$ (get the hint? ROTFL).

[Blounty]

At 6/1/12 02:24 PM, ClSanders wrote: Aye guy to be honest with you this is pretty bad! But don't be discouraged, 'cause even if it were remotely passable, this is still the wrong place to ask... UNLE$$ (get the hint? ROTFL).

Not really, this isn't just the place for animators to demand money, yes it's good for the OP to post whether it's payed work or not. But a few animators will do it just for experience, fun or just if they like the script.

Also don't say something is pretty bad unless you have some actual critique to go with it. This guy actually decided to post a script unlike some of the people that come in here demanding animation.

GET THE HINT ROTFL

[ClSanders]

At 6/1/12 02:41 PM, Blounty wrote: Not really, this isn't just the place for animators to demand money, yes it's good for the OP to post whether it's payed work or not. But a few animators will do it just for experience, fun or just if they like the script.

Also don't say something is pretty bad unless you have some actual critique to go with it. This guy actually decided to post a script unlike some of the people that come in here demanding animation.

GET THE HINT ROTFL

oh SORREEee for not taking the time to point out all the specifics! With well thought out "scripts" such as this one I guess every single word needs to be accounted for and analyzed, for it's OH SO CRUCIAL to fully understand the plot! butt weight, everything Jayandjay (OP for a internet savvy guy such as yourself! ~_^ ) is horribly cliched! Stoner zombie movie... my goodness, HOW DOES ONE EVEN COME UP WITH SUCH AN IDEA?! I mean, Jay and unnamed accomplice?! THIS IS GOLD, JERRY, GOLD.

Even yooou have to admit, what he wrote took little to no imagination or creativity, but most importantly, EFFORT! Which is why at this point, he shouldn't be bothered being on these boards, but instead jotting down all those nutty ideas that come into his head. Then when he's ready, come back! If he's got something good (bc c'mon buster, you know you're not digging this script neither) then I'm sure he'll get the response he wants. Yes or nooooo... ?

Which brings me to my next issue daddy-o, just how often do people take up these unpaid commissions? Because I've been browsing these boards for a while, and in nearly every "ANIM8TOR WANTED" thread it either goes unreplied, or "wut about the cash hombre??"

So yeah, that's that.