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Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 00:54:49 Reply

Thanks for taking the time to look! Just want some pointers and constructive criticism.

Don't be afraid to tell me is sucks, I want to know.

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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 00:58:32 Reply

Sorry, Shes supposed to be holding a staff. Heres a better pic to get the pose.

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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 09:01:57 Reply

The line quality is alright but the anatomy is way up shit creak. Here's a bunch of references, http://kxhara.deviantart.com/gallery/29259694 Kind of NSFW

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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 12:26:45 Reply

I think that moreso than anatomy, the proportions are the main problem. I see that you're trying to show perspective, but it's not really working that well. How are your proportions when there is no perspective?

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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 14:19:44 Reply

At 5/26/12 12:26 PM, ExtremeFudgeMaster wrote: I think that moreso than anatomy, the proportions are the main problem. I see that you're trying to show perspective, but it's not really working that well. How are your proportions when there is no perspective?

I think I can do proportions rather well if it's just a normal front view, but this whole sketch was to practice drawing in perspective. Any tips?


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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 14:26:28 Reply

At 5/26/12 02:19 PM, micky315 wrote:
At 5/26/12 12:26 PM, ExtremeFudgeMaster wrote: I think that moreso than anatomy, the proportions are the main problem. I see that you're trying to show perspective, but it's not really working that well. How are your proportions when there is no perspective?
I think I can do proportions rather well if it's just a normal front view, but this whole sketch was to practice drawing in perspective. Any tips?

http://e1n.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Magic-Perspective-Gui delines-292711834?q=favby%3Afluffkomix%2F49732252&qo=69
More perspective figures

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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 14:59:19 Reply

everything above the waist is awful.

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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 19:21:28 Reply

At 5/26/12 02:59 PM, EnactJudo wrote: everything above the waist is awful.

Thank you!


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Response to Critique My Latest Sketch? 2012-05-26 20:17:26 Reply

At 5/26/12 12:54 AM, micky315 wrote: Thanks for taking the time to look! Just want some pointers and constructive criticism.

Don't be afraid to tell me is sucks, I want to know.

Doesnt suck but could use more body porportions,

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