very cartoony when you're trying to be somewhat realistic. medicore scribbly shading with no light source. need to push the value scale more. the perspective & proportions are way off. the womans anatomy is poorly done, her face is in a ridiculous unrealistic perspective and she is floating on non-existent legs. her hair is a mess too. you got lazy with the background, i assume that you were trying to draw some sort of mountain range & beach, but it looks like a giant turd & a weird out-of-perspective waterfall. terrible scribble clouds. also, that tank looks hilariously awkward.
overall grade: gay 2/10. let me guess, you are "inspired" to draw by your favorite generic anime/manga artists.