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my drwings yaaaay May. 11th, 2012 @ 11:18 PM Reply

please judge my drawings an tell me what i could improve

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 11th, 2012 @ 11:21 PM Reply

At 5/11/12 11:18 PM, kyriun-kun wrote: please judge my drawings an tell me what i could improve

Kind of hypocritical of me since people always tell me my characters have a lot of hair, but damn, that'sa lot of hair!

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 11th, 2012 @ 11:22 PM Reply

lol

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 11th, 2012 @ 11:24 PM Reply

At 5/11/12 11:22 PM, kyriun-kun wrote: lol

Now this one ressembles my character... only a lot less violent and more feminine.

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 11th, 2012 @ 11:25 PM Reply

Now this one ressembles my character... only a lot less violent and more feminine.

i know but looks sad

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 11th, 2012 @ 11:27 PM Reply

At 5/11/12 11:18 PM, kyriun-kun wrote: please judge my drawings an tell me what i could improve

It looks like you scanned this, and the put a filter on it in Photoshop. Hes just blankly looking forward with no expression, stiff as a board. I would classify this one as generic wannabe anime, and that's not a place anyone should want to be. Hey, you wanted me to judge it.
You should/could improve;

Expression
Pose
Drapery
Anatomy
Drawing without the aid of grids
Line quality
Stop drawing anime (personal preference, but honestly do we really need more of this stuff in the world? Plus it stunts your growth in improving.)

So that's basically everything, good luck.


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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 11th, 2012 @ 11:27 PM Reply

mmm

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 13th, 2012 @ 10:10 PM Reply

We've got a nice shading tutorial herethat you might find useful.


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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 19th, 2012 @ 05:04 PM Reply

i think this one need something but idk what

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 19th, 2012 @ 06:14 PM Reply

At 5/11/12 11:22 PM, kyriun-kun wrote: lol

This one is better than the first picture that you posted in my opinion. The first one was nice, but like mentioned previously there is a lot of hair. My favorite thing about the first one is the shirt though. The folds in it are very smooth and flow well together. The second one is more favored though because of the hair. There is a good balance of hair in that one and another thing that helps the second drawing out more is the hat. The rings around the base of the hat are really nice! It gives it a sense of texture! Overall not too shabby.

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 20th, 2012 @ 02:44 PM Reply

This one is better than the first picture that you posted in my opinion. The first one was nice, but like mentioned previously there is a lot of hair. My favorite thing about the first one is the shirt though. The folds in it are very smooth and flow well together. The second one is more favored though because of the hair. There is a good balance of hair .

thanks and i like to make my draws whit a looooooottttsss of har so its fine to me

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 24th, 2012 @ 06:04 PM Reply

some chibiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 24th, 2012 @ 06:21 PM Reply

At 5/24/12 06:04 PM, kyriun-kun wrote: some chibiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!

This one isn't as good as the others, but perhaps it's because it is computer generated? Do you have a tablet? If so you should try adding more detail. I know manga is supposed to be simple, but it just looks plain and just like the other manga. P.S. What kind of program did you use to make the Chibi in?

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 24th, 2012 @ 06:28 PM Reply

At 5/24/12 06:04 PM, kyriun-kun wrote: some chibiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!

DOUBLEPOST.SORRY. I went back and looked at the drawing again and I withdraw what I said in the previous post. This drawing is actually really good! I took a closer look at it and there is more than meets the eye. I really like the use of shadows you incorporated into it and the eyes have a nice glossy look to them. Although it's not a masterpiece it's still pretty good. It looks like you used photoshop?

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 24th, 2012 @ 07:43 PM Reply

really like the use of shadows you incorporated into it and the eyes have a nice glossy look to them. Although it's not a masterpiece it's still pretty good. It looks like you used photoshop?

thanks and i use manga studio ex 4

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 24th, 2012 @ 08:20 PM Reply

At 5/19/12 05:04 PM, kyriun-kun wrote: i think this one need something but idk what

I think it needs more cats, meow!

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 30th, 2012 @ 11:11 PM Reply

lol another image (work in progress)

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Response to my drwings yaaaay May. 30th, 2012 @ 11:48 PM Reply

SORRY DOUBLE POST

this make easier to see

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Response to my drwings yaaaay Jun. 2nd, 2012 @ 07:58 PM Reply

some progress

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Response to my drwings yaaaay Jun. 2nd, 2012 @ 08:32 PM Reply

In my honest opinion, you should draw from real life references instead of going for the anime style. Nothing wrong with anime, but it's real difficult to work with it if you don't have a good foundation of human anatomy and proportions. Once you have that, then go onto any style you want (maybe even make up your own) and you'll find that your drawings will drastically improve.

learn the rules before you break them

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Response to my drwings yaaaay Jun. 2nd, 2012 @ 08:49 PM Reply

At 6/2/12 08:32 PM, Izzy-A wrote: In my honest opinion, you should draw from real life references instead of going for the anime style. Nothing wrong with anime, but it's real difficult to work with it if you don't have a good foundation of human anatomy and proportions. Once you have that, then go onto any style you want (maybe even make up your own) and you'll find that your drawings will drastically improve.

well i really dont like to use references y only use them when im really desesperate because i like to make it from the nowhere to be more creative