At 5/4/12 06:50 PM, TIYF wrote:
It is a meme face i did in 30 minutes and hope to see it go viral one day,
And that would be your primary mistake.
As for the picture, I have no idea what it's supposed to be, and the description of "winning" didn't help matters. The varying line weights just make things more confusing since they have no consistency, the eyes can only interpreted as such because they're on something that could be described as a face, and it looks like something that could literally be doodled in fifteen seconds.
With the last point, yes, there are a few absurd meme faces that are chicken scratches, but they're closed shapes. For whatever reason, your drawing is open with two line things below attached to nothing which I'll guess are the farmer's tan of an invisible man.
Another thing most good meme faces have are that they're easily recognizable. I struggle to recognize your drawing as a face, let alone an actual emotion or something that can be "meme'd".
TL;DR- Don't make meme faces.
Also good fucking God I typed all that shit out for a topic that is already dumb.