Hello Newgrounds! :3 Nsfw

[ChocolateKitteh]

Hello Newgrounds^^

I'm ChocolateKitteh and I'm new here ^^ Jut signed up yesterday :3
I'd like you to ask what you think of my work:
It's an uncensored version of my "Enchained Lust" painting on deviantART :3

I'm sorry I had to recreate this post because I forgot to add "NSFW" in the title D:

[BlackMist75]

"Only use adult content in highly artistic or hilarious situations. We don't want this to be a hentai gallery."
~The Art Forum rules

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/29/12 12:15 PM, BlackMist75 wrote: "Only use adult content in highly artistic or hilarious situations. We don't want this to be a hentai gallery."
~The Art Forum rules

So it's not artistic enough? :/

[EnactJudo]

hi every1 im new!!!!!!! *holds up spork* my name is katy but u can call me t3h PeNgU1N oF d00m!!!!!!!! lol...as u can see im very random!!!! thats why i came here, 2 meetrandom ppl like me ^_^... im 13 years old (im mature 4 my age tho!!) i like 2 watch invader zim w/ my girlfreind (im bi if u dont like it deal w/it) its our favorite tv show!!! bcuz its SOOOO random!!!! shes random 2 of course but i want 2 meet more random ppl =) like they say the more the merrier!!!! lol...neways i hope 2 make alot of freinds here so give me lots of commentses!!!!DOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <--- me bein random again ^_^ hehe...toodles!!!!!

love and waffles,
*~t3h PeNgU1N oF d00m~*

[ChocolateKitteh]

THIS IS A NSFW TREAD! D: BOTH OF YOU AREN'T EVEN 18 YET! D:

>___<

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/29/12 12:34 PM, EnactJudo wrote: hi every1 im new!!!!!!! *holds up spork* my name is katy but u can call me t3h PeNgU1N oF d00m!!!!!!!! lol...as u can see im very random!!!! thats why i came here, 2 meetrandom ppl like me ^_^... im 13 years old (im mature 4 my age tho!!)

love and waffles,
*~t3h PeNgU1N oF d00m~*

Aren't you a guy...? >_> You're not even new o:

[Re2deemer]

At 4/29/12 12:36 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote: THIS IS A NSFW TREAD! D: BOTH OF YOU AREN'T EVEN 18 YET! D:

>___<

But I am. ADULT HAS ARRIVED.

*Ahem*
Blackmist has a point. There's a fine point between the...eh, "artistic" nudity and the "I want to create some boners" nudity. And yours is hardly the former.

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/29/12 12:43 PM, Re2deemer wrote:
But I am. ADULT HAS ARRIVED.

*Ahem*
Blackmist has a point. There's a fine point between the...eh, "artistic" nudity and the "I want to create some boners" nudity. And yours is hardly the former.

Mkay.. And can you give a further explanation as well? :/ Proportions wrong, background too lame, shading sucks?

[Amaranthus]

At 4/29/12 12:47 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote:

It's perverted

[bigjonny13]

At 4/29/12 12:47 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote: Mkay.. And can you give a further explanation as well? :/ Proportions wrong, background too lame, shading sucks?

The shading is inaccurate.
You've got candles and a torch in the background, yet the shading implies lighting from the front. It's all inconsistent.

[BlackMist75]

At 4/29/12 12:47 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote:

At 4/29/12 12:43 PM, Re2deemer wrote:

Mkay.. And can you give a further explanation as well? :/ Proportions wrong, background too lame, shading sucks?

it's disturbing. O.o I mean, I like TheShadling's art, but this looks .-. idk

[BlackMist75]

At 4/29/12 12:50 PM, Amaranthus wrote:

At 4/29/12 12:47 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote:

It's perverted

She said it's NSFW...noob :3

[Ephyse]

Hi, welcome :)
For your image, i definitly think that the back takes too much importance on the image, we have to focus on the 2 ladies, not on the background. this image must have a "hot" ambiance. why did you colored curtains in flashy green and blue? why not an orange-red?
why not put a red gradient starting at the up of the image? would be like a light :3
also try to respect light, here you have shadows everywhere. your flames are on the up, it would make more contrast if it was more dark at the down.
and for the anatomy, i think that they are too thin! but these are my personal taste

and sorry for the english, i'm french <:^)

[ChocolateKitteh]

Hm.. Okay..

And I coloured the curtains green and blue to have a contrast to the red and yellow :/

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/29/12 12:56 PM, BlackMist75 wrote: it's disturbing. O.o I mean, I like TheShadling's art, but this looks .-. idk

You find TheShadling's art less disturbing that this?! D: I mean a Kim Possible full of cum?!... .___.

[BlackMist75]

At 4/29/12 01:10 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote:

At 4/29/12 12:56 PM, BlackMist75 wrote: it's disturbing. O.o I mean, I like TheShadling's art, but this looks .-. idk

You find TheShadling's art less disturbing that this?! D: I mean a Kim Possible full of cum?!... .___.

*childhood ruined* ;_; i didn't see that one

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/29/12 01:13 PM, BlackMist75 wrote: *childhood ruined* ;_; i didn't see that one

Oh noooooooo D: I'm sorry D: I didn't mean to do that DD: I thought you had already seen it... .___.

[Ephyse]

Look, i've tried somethink with the lights and the curtains, i'ts harmonic :D
i don't know if you like, but i think it's more "dungeon" ^^

hihi you can also put "bat textures" on the curtains X)

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/29/12 01:18 PM, Ephyse wrote: Look, i've tried somethink with the lights and the curtains, i'ts harmonic :D
i don't know if you like, but i think it's more "dungeon" ^^

hihi you can also put "bat textures" on the curtains X)

Well, the quality got a bit a low now.. xD But the reddish thing doesn't look that bad, though... Reminds me kind of of Hell with all that red and black C: Maybe I should do set a certain colour as the "main" colour for next pictures.. o:

[EnactJudo]

At 4/29/12 12:39 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote: Aren't you a guy...? >_> You're not even new o:

13/f/cali looking 4 marine to satisfy my needs

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/29/12 01:54 PM, EnactJudo wrote: 13/f/cali looking 4 marine to satisfy my needs

Tsk tsk, I think your gf will not be pleased when she reads that :3

[argile]

At 4/29/12 01:13 PM, BlackMist75 wrote:

At 4/29/12 01:10 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote:

At 4/29/12 12:56 PM, BlackMist75 wrote: it's disturbing. O.o I mean, I like TheShadling's art, but this looks .-. idk

You find TheShadling's art less disturbing that this?! D: I mean a Kim Possible full of cum?!... .___.

*childhood ruined* ;_; i didn't see that one

So that means you watched that when you were about 9, I was about to say teenagers weren't capable of having innocence at that 15...

[Amaranthus]

At 4/29/12 12:56 PM, BlackMist75 wrote:

At 4/29/12 12:47 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote:

At 4/29/12 12:43 PM, Re2deemer wrote:

Mkay.. And can you give a further explanation as well? :/ Proportions wrong, background too lame, shading sucks?

it's disturbing. O.o I mean, I like TheShadling's art, but this looks .-. idk

NSFW can also mean artistic nude.

[lovingthedark]

Anatomy-wise the figures are lacking a lot. The breasts on both figures are too high and bulbous, they have no wrist bones (like the bump formed by the knob of the ulna), and they're frighteningly skinny. Ephyse is right about the color palette. Also, is that supposed to be a cut on the blonde between her legs or is that supposed to be genitalia? If it's the latter, it's too high up.

Both the cat and the pain kinks seem silly to me, but hardly disturbing.

[pockets08]

guess i should be glad im 21, cause i didnt knwo what the fuck NSFW meant. I mean, I was like "Why the fuck did she make a Need For Speed World post?"

- so I obvioulsy read it incorrectly, and was still clueless to its meaning afterwards. Afterwards, meaning now.

[lovingthedark]

At 4/30/12 01:43 AM, pockets08 wrote: Afterwards, meaning now.

NSFW is a common acronym around the internet that stands for Not Safe For Work, usually referring to nudity that could get someone into trouble if they were caught browsing on such a page during work hours.

[pockets08]

NSFW is a common acronym around the internet that stands for Not Safe For Work, usually referring to nudity that could get someone into trouble if they were caught browsing on such a page during work hours.

well see, learn something new everyday. Oh well, no sense is common these days.

[ChocolateKitteh]

At 4/30/12 01:35 AM, lovingthedark wrote: Anatomy-wise the figures are lacking a lot. The breasts on both figures are too high and bulbous, they have no wrist bones (like the bump formed by the knob of the ulna), and they're frighteningly skinny. Ephyse is right about the color palette. Also, is that supposed to be a cut on the blonde between her legs or is that supposed to be genitalia? If it's the latter, it's too high up.

Both the cat and the pain kinks seem silly to me, but hardly disturbing.

Oh my.. That bad? :/
And what have all of you guys with that "skinny"?! They're not very skinny to me, I am even way skinnier than them >_> Most girls from my school have their body type :/ (Well, except for those large boobs ofc)
But then again, most people here are from the USA! (no offense.. but you guys do eat a lot of fast food D:)

[pockets08]

Oh my.. That bad? :/
And what have all of you guys with that "skinny"?! They're not very skinny to me, I am even way skinnier than them >_> Most girls from my school have their body type :/ (Well, except for those large boobs ofc)
But then again, most people here are from the USA! (no offense.. but you guys do eat a lot of fast food D:)

I think your drawing, has no emphasis. If its nude, generally the idea is emphasis on the situation, that somone would want to see, as a situation. - The anatomy might be "correct" in some lights, but for nudity, its not. I dont think there is any emphasis on anything, like in Shadlings art, he has emphasis on everything, that the picture points out. Things are thicker, rounder, more detailed, and shaded, for emphasis on the objective goal of the image... IMO...IMO...

[lovingthedark]

At 4/30/12 07:21 PM, ChocolateKitteh wrote:
Oh my.. That bad? :/
And what have all of you guys with that "skinny"?! They're not very skinny to me, I am even way skinnier than them >_> Most girls from my school have their body type :/ (Well, except for those large boobs ofc)
But then again, most people here are from the USA! (no offense.. but you guys do eat a lot of fast food D:)

I'm slender myself, but my forearms don't lose half their mass between elbow and wrist- more like a third at the thinnest point, which is not how yours are viewed. I doubt your arms are any different.
Pockets, do you mean that the image lacks a focal point? I'm not sure I understand your comment.