Oh my.. That bad? :/
And what have all of you guys with that "skinny"?! They're not very skinny to me, I am even way skinnier than them >_> Most girls from my school have their body type :/ (Well, except for those large boobs ofc)
But then again, most people here are from the USA! (no offense.. but you guys do eat a lot of fast food D:)
I think your drawing, has no emphasis. If its nude, generally the idea is emphasis on the situation, that somone would want to see, as a situation. - The anatomy might be "correct" in some lights, but for nudity, its not. I dont think there is any emphasis on anything, like in Shadlings art, he has emphasis on everything, that the picture points out. Things are thicker, rounder, more detailed, and shaded, for emphasis on the objective goal of the image... IMO...IMO...