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JoHobo2
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feedback please Apr. 29th, 2012 @ 12:25 AM Reply

Knocked this together in an hour or two as a quick practice and was hoping to get some feedback. Please forgive the lack of audio, colour or discernible plot/point.

rocket practice

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Response to feedback please Apr. 29th, 2012 @ 10:47 PM Reply

anyone?

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Response to feedback please Apr. 29th, 2012 @ 10:49 PM Reply

damn. my girlfriend left herself signed in on my laptop :s. that was me

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Response to feedback please Apr. 30th, 2012 @ 08:30 AM Reply

At 4/29/12 12:25 AM, JoHobo2 wrote: Knocked this together in an hour or two as a quick practice and was hoping to get some feedback. Please forgive the lack of audio, colour or discernible plot/point.

rocket practice

Nice. I'm afraid I don't have any real feedback for you. Clean it up, add colour, sound and backgrounds and maybe you'd get some comments. But at this stage? It's not bad.

Sorry.

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Response to feedback please Apr. 30th, 2012 @ 01:08 PM Reply

Looking good! I think the smoke at the end should dissipate a little more slowly and the blood splat on the screen should be a little more animated (some guts slowly dripping down would be nice).


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