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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 18th, 2013 @ 09:16 PM Reply

I've been sketching stuff in my sketchbook lately. This one's a modified version of a friend's character.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 18th, 2013 @ 09:18 PM Reply

From there on out I had a bit of fun with the idea. This one was done without any kind of planning whatsoever.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 18th, 2013 @ 09:21 PM Reply

I've also practiced different facial structures.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 18th, 2013 @ 09:24 PM Reply

This one's cut off in the previous image...

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 18th, 2013 @ 09:51 PM Reply

And some mores faces. I realize these are a little small so if you actually want to see them better here's a link to a submission of the same image where you can actually zoom in.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 18th, 2013 @ 09:53 PM Reply

Er... remember the executionner of worlds?
Things are not going very well for the whole executing the world thing...

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 18th, 2013 @ 09:55 PM Reply

Oops.. forgot this in the facial structures thing. You might notice a very small difference from m usual female character faces...

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Mar. 22nd, 2013 @ 04:45 AM Reply

I realized that while spending so much time working on female anatomy, I pretty much left my knowledge of male anatomy where it was. When I started this thread, I could draw men a lot better than I could women, now it seems the situation has reversed itself.

So I drew this....thing...

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 03:17 AM Reply

When's the last time I actually finished something? Here, I'll be fully coloring this.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 07:43 AM Reply

At 4/2/13 03:17 AM, PatBest22 wrote: When's the last time I actually finished something? Here, I'll be fully coloring this.

The right hand seems kind of big for the position it's in

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 01:59 PM Reply

At 4/2/13 07:43 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

The right hand seems kind of big for the position it's in

Is that the right hand or her right hand? Or rather: the one holding the gun or the one holding the sword?

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 02:39 PM Reply

At 4/2/13 01:59 PM, PatBest22 wrote: Is that the right hand or her right hand? Or rather: the one holding the gun or the one holding the sword?

Her right hand, the one holding the gun.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 03:02 PM Reply

At 4/2/13 07:43 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 4/2/13 03:17 AM, PatBest22 wrote: When's the last time I actually finished something? Here, I'll be fully coloring this.
The right hand seems kind of big for the position it's in

Hm it might be very slightly too big. I'll try to improve it. Thanks!

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 05:24 PM Reply

I cleaned up the lines, made the hair motion look more real, made the right hand smaller, added detail to the sword and made the blade straighter. Any further remarks before I start coloring?

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 06:04 PM Reply

At 4/2/13 05:24 PM, PatBest22 wrote: I cleaned up the lines, made the hair motion look more real, made the right hand smaller, added detail to the sword and made the blade straighter. Any further remarks before I start coloring?

ok that is really awesome drawing cant wait to see it done :D.....do you have an deviant art

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 2nd, 2013 @ 06:51 PM Reply

At 4/2/13 06:04 PM, KLT1M wrote:
At 4/2/13 05:24 PM, PatBest22 wrote: I cleaned up the lines, made the hair motion look more real, made the right hand smaller, added detail to the sword and made the blade straighter. Any further remarks before I start coloring?
ok that is really awesome drawing cant wait to see it done :D.....do you have an deviant art

Thanks :)

I do indeed have a deviantart, http://pat22.deviantart.com/

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 14th, 2013 @ 08:57 PM Reply

Ok backgrounds, I don't like you and you don't like me, but we gotta work together on this one!

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. Apr. 27th, 2013 @ 11:57 PM Reply

Some sketches I started today to be completed eventually.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. May. 25th, 2013 @ 11:37 PM Reply

And some more, today was somewhat productive.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. May. 26th, 2013 @ 10:04 PM Reply

At 5/25/13 11:37 PM, PatBest22 wrote: And some more, today was somewhat productive.

what ever it is its awesome :D

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. May. 27th, 2013 @ 10:58 PM Reply

Another sketch I don't know when I'll finish.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. May. 27th, 2013 @ 11:24 PM Reply

At 4/2/13 05:24 PM, PatBest22 wrote: I cleaned up the lines, made the hair motion look more real, made the right hand smaller, added detail to the sword and made the blade straighter. Any further remarks before I start coloring?

This pose is so awesome. Love your lineworks.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. May. 27th, 2013 @ 11:25 PM Reply

At 5/27/13 11:24 PM, bigCman321 wrote:
This pose is so awesome. Love your lineworks.

Thanks :)
I do put a lot of effort into the linework, knowing I'm better at it than the color, so it means a lot that you enjoy it.

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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. May. 27th, 2013 @ 11:27 PM Reply

At 5/27/13 10:58 PM, PatBest22 wrote: Another sketch I don't know when I'll finish.

Awesome detail work! Are you using SBP...Lite... Express (whatever it is) ...for all this stuff?

sorry if you already answered that somewhere. I obviously missed it! :P
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Response to Pat's drawings - feedback wanted. May. 27th, 2013 @ 11:31 PM Reply

At 5/27/13 11:27 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:
Awesome detail work! Are you using SBP...Lite... Express (whatever it is) ...for all this stuff?
sorry if you already answered that somewhere. I obviously missed it! :P

I used it for the undead rogue sketch. I ought to use it more for sketches.

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