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PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 10:50:54 Reply

Hi!
I just make an art thread. I know that I'm not the best. And also, I still have to learn so much. That is why I want to ask your opinion. Give me useful criticism to my work be better.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 10:52:17 Reply

And here it is.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 10:53:39 Reply

At 4/20/12 10:52 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And here it is.

And this.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 10:55:19 Reply

At 4/20/12 10:53 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:
At 4/20/12 10:52 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And here it is.
And this.

This is about my dream (ctually a nightmare).

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:21:38 Reply

At 4/20/12 10:55 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:
At 4/20/12 10:53 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:
At 4/20/12 10:52 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And here it is.
And this.
This is about my dream (ctually a nightmare).

Sorry. THAT was my dream.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:22:39 Reply

This earned a high score at my pictures.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:23:38 Reply

I find that rose and demon pretty intriguing. Shame they are on line paper though.


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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:24:04 Reply

I like it too.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:25:44 Reply

And a cobraswan. :P

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:50:47 Reply

Basically what Kinsei said.
The concepts you've got going are pretty decent here, but the fact that some of the pieces are on lined paper really detracts from it. So just avoid lined paper when you want to draw.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:52:19 Reply

Here it is.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:55:10 Reply

At 4/20/12 11:50 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Basically what Kinsei said.
The concepts you've got going are pretty decent here, but the fact that some of the pieces are on lined paper really detracts from it. So just avoid lined paper when you want to draw.

Okay, I try to doing so.
Thanks.

And here an another one. The cute duckball.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:56:52 Reply

At 4/20/12 11:23 AM, Kinsei01 wrote: I find that rose and demon pretty intriguing. Shame they are on line paper though.

Thanks for the good advice. :)

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-20 11:58:11 Reply

ghost.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-21 07:36:31 Reply

And this catcell. Please give me some opinion.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-21 10:24:03 Reply

And a weird dog.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-21 19:47:13 Reply

your concepts are really cool and surreal! I like your use of pencil crayon.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-23 10:33:14 Reply

At 4/21/12 06:32 PM, SeanJoystick wrote: your anatomy is pretty decent, but the other stuff is eh?
Like you had a bunch of life drawing classes, or managed to accurately replicate a certain body and then that was it.
Either way its defo better than mostly everyone. if that makes sensicalz.

Thanks. That's a good advice. So here is tha newest drawing. Your critics due that I made more details and ENVIRONMENT. I hope you like it. :)

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-23 10:35:30 Reply

At 4/23/12 10:33 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:
At 4/21/12 06:32 PM, SeanJoystick wrote: your anatomy is pretty decent, but the other stuff is eh?
Like you had a bunch of life drawing classes, or managed to accurately replicate a certain body and then that was it.
Either way its defo better than mostly everyone. if that makes sensicalz.
Thanks. That's a good advice. So here is tha newest drawing. Your critics due that I made more details and ENVIRONMENT. I hope you like it. :)

Sorry for the bad picture. But the NG just permitted max 200 KB file. The better one is in my art.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-23 10:48:54 Reply

At 4/23/12 10:35 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Sorry for the bad picture. But the NG just permitted max 200 KB file. The better one is in my art.

If you want people to acknowledge that your art is higher quality but you have to tone it down to post here simply upload it to your dumping site or your profile, upload a lower quality one here and then post a link to it here. People aren't going to trawl NG for your piece. We are simply too lazy for that.


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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-23 11:05:53 Reply

At 4/23/12 10:48 AM, Decky wrote:
At 4/23/12 10:35 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Sorry for the bad picture. But the NG just permitted max 200 KB file. The better one is in my art.
If you want people to acknowledge that your art is higher quality but you have to tone it down to post here simply upload it to your dumping site or your profile, upload a lower quality one here and then post a link to it here. People aren't going to trawl NG for your piece. We are simply too lazy for that.

Okay.. I'll try it.

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    Ok. Others said that the most important problem in my work is that I don't draw environment, my figures in the endness whiten...

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-23 11:09:23 Reply

At 4/23/12 11:05 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Okay.. I'll try it.

You got it, from now on though just for easiness post the uploaded picture and a link in the same post and jobs a good'n.


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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-23 11:19:51 Reply

At 4/23/12 11:09 AM, Decky wrote:
At 4/23/12 11:05 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Okay.. I'll try it.
You got it, from now on though just for easiness post the uploaded picture and a link in the same post and jobs a good'n.

Thanks. :)

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-24 10:18:40 Reply

And here is my supernewest work with ENVIRONMENT! :D

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    Here it is my (new) work with ENVIRONMENT. Made with colored pencils and colored needlepunches. 2012 spring

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-24 16:09:16 Reply

Huge improvement. Your work reminds me of ancient Babylonian art.

I think the next step for you as an artist is to learn how to imply three dimensional space in a two dimensional work. Here are some tutorials on perspectiveand shading, if you would like to learn.


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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-25 06:56:07 Reply

At 4/24/12 04:09 PM, lovingthedark wrote: Huge improvement. Your work reminds me of ancient Babylonian art.

I think the next step for you as an artist is to learn how to imply three dimensional space in a two dimensional work. Here are some tutorials on perspectiveand shading, if you would like to learn.

Thanks. I'll try to became better (of course).

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-25 17:52:26 Reply

very surreal, reminds me of works from the likes of Lewis Carroll and and H. P. Lovecraft.

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-04-26 08:08:27 Reply

At 4/25/12 05:52 PM, M-Maher wrote: very surreal, reminds me of works from the likes of Lewis Carroll and and H. P. Lovecraft.

Thanks. :)

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-05-02 08:50:13 Reply

And a self portrait.

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    A self portrait with a little acid trip. Made with colored pencils and colored needlepunch. 2012 spring

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Response to PAL1234567891's art thread 2012-05-02 10:11:20 Reply

At 5/2/12 08:50 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And a self portrait.

To be honest, I preferred your earlier pieces. I'm not too sure about your methods of colouring. What are you using? A simple colouring pencil? This is all well and good but I think that the way you use it leaves a lot of visible white. Try using the side of the pencil point.


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