PAL1234567891's art thread

[PAL1234567891]

Hi!
I just make an art thread. I know that I'm not the best. And also, I still have to learn so much. That is why I want to ask your opinion. Give me useful criticism to my work be better.

[PAL1234567891]

And here it is.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/20/12 10:52 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And here it is.

And this.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/20/12 10:53 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:

At 4/20/12 10:52 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And here it is.

And this.

This is about my dream (ctually a nightmare).

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/20/12 10:55 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:

At 4/20/12 10:53 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:

At 4/20/12 10:52 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And here it is.

And this.

This is about my dream (ctually a nightmare).

Sorry. THAT was my dream.

[PAL1234567891]

This earned a high score at my pictures.

[Kinsei]

I find that rose and demon pretty intriguing. Shame they are on line paper though.

[PAL1234567891]

I like it too.

[PAL1234567891]

And a cobraswan. :P

[bigjonny13]

Basically what Kinsei said.
The concepts you've got going are pretty decent here, but the fact that some of the pieces are on lined paper really detracts from it. So just avoid lined paper when you want to draw.

[PAL1234567891]

Here it is.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/20/12 11:50 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Basically what Kinsei said.
The concepts you've got going are pretty decent here, but the fact that some of the pieces are on lined paper really detracts from it. So just avoid lined paper when you want to draw.

Okay, I try to doing so.
Thanks.

And here an another one. The cute duckball.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/20/12 11:23 AM, Kinsei01 wrote: I find that rose and demon pretty intriguing. Shame they are on line paper though.

Thanks for the good advice. :)

[PAL1234567891]

ghost.

[PAL1234567891]

And this catcell. Please give me some opinion.

[PAL1234567891]

And a weird dog.

[PixelPocket]

your concepts are really cool and surreal! I like your use of pencil crayon.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/21/12 06:32 PM, SeanJoystick wrote: your anatomy is pretty decent, but the other stuff is eh?
Like you had a bunch of life drawing classes, or managed to accurately replicate a certain body and then that was it.
Either way its defo better than mostly everyone. if that makes sensicalz.

Thanks. That's a good advice. So here is tha newest drawing. Your critics due that I made more details and ENVIRONMENT. I hope you like it. :)

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/23/12 10:33 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote:

At 4/21/12 06:32 PM, SeanJoystick wrote: your anatomy is pretty decent, but the other stuff is eh?
Like you had a bunch of life drawing classes, or managed to accurately replicate a certain body and then that was it.
Either way its defo better than mostly everyone. if that makes sensicalz.

Thanks. That's a good advice. So here is tha newest drawing. Your critics due that I made more details and ENVIRONMENT. I hope you like it. :)

Sorry for the bad picture. But the NG just permitted max 200 KB file. The better one is in my art.

[Decky]

At 4/23/12 10:35 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Sorry for the bad picture. But the NG just permitted max 200 KB file. The better one is in my art.

If you want people to acknowledge that your art is higher quality but you have to tone it down to post here simply upload it to your dumping site or your profile, upload a lower quality one here and then post a link to it here. People aren't going to trawl NG for your piece. We are simply too lazy for that.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/23/12 10:48 AM, Decky wrote:

At 4/23/12 10:35 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Sorry for the bad picture. But the NG just permitted max 200 KB file. The better one is in my art.

If you want people to acknowledge that your art is higher quality but you have to tone it down to post here simply upload it to your dumping site or your profile, upload a lower quality one here and then post a link to it here. People aren't going to trawl NG for your piece. We are simply too lazy for that.

Okay.. I'll try it.

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  Wittch Saturday by PAL1234567891

  Ok. Others said that the most important problem in my work is that I don't draw environment, my figures in the endness whiten...

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[Decky]

At 4/23/12 11:05 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Okay.. I'll try it.

You got it, from now on though just for easiness post the uploaded picture and a link in the same post and jobs a good'n.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/23/12 11:09 AM, Decky wrote:

At 4/23/12 11:05 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: Okay.. I'll try it.

You got it, from now on though just for easiness post the uploaded picture and a link in the same post and jobs a good'n.

Thanks. :)

[PAL1234567891]

And here is my supernewest work with ENVIRONMENT! :D

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  Demon prince by PAL1234567891

  Here it is my (new) work with ENVIRONMENT. Made with colored pencils and colored needlepunches. 2012 spring

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[lovingthedark]

Huge improvement. Your work reminds me of ancient Babylonian art.

I think the next step for you as an artist is to learn how to imply three dimensional space in a two dimensional work. Here are some tutorials on perspectiveand shading, if you would like to learn.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/24/12 04:09 PM, lovingthedark wrote: Huge improvement. Your work reminds me of ancient Babylonian art.

I think the next step for you as an artist is to learn how to imply three dimensional space in a two dimensional work. Here are some tutorials on perspectiveand shading, if you would like to learn.

Thanks. I'll try to became better (of course).

[M-Maher]

very surreal, reminds me of works from the likes of Lewis Carroll and and H. P. Lovecraft.

[PAL1234567891]

At 4/25/12 05:52 PM, M-Maher wrote: very surreal, reminds me of works from the likes of Lewis Carroll and and H. P. Lovecraft.

Thanks. :)

[PAL1234567891]

And a self portrait.

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  Flash by PAL1234567891

  A self portrait with a little acid trip. Made with colored pencils and colored needlepunch. 2012 spring

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[Decky]

At 5/2/12 08:50 AM, PAL1234567891 wrote: And a self portrait.

To be honest, I preferred your earlier pieces. I'm not too sure about your methods of colouring. What are you using? A simple colouring pencil? This is all well and good but I think that the way you use it leaves a lot of visible white. Try using the side of the pencil point.