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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 00:50:17

heres some progress, looking good?
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/00ca58fb7b94480bd411c579 131f7d49


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 01:15:26

At 4/21/12 12:50 AM, NeroGeist wrote: heres some progress, looking good?
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/00ca58fb7b94480bd411c579 131f7d49

Lookin' good to me, man!


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 01:24:38

At 4/21/12 01:15 AM, Emrox wrote:
At 4/21/12 12:50 AM, NeroGeist wrote: heres some progress, looking good?
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/00ca58fb7b94480bd411c579 131f7d49
Lookin' good to me, man!

Thank you! Yours looks pretty sweet as well!


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 04:47:12

Okay got everything, voices, storyboard n animatic and sounds prepared and done... all i need to do now is animation ;D
I will post few tasty naked pics soon

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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 07:21:11

At 4/21/12 12:50 AM, NeroGeist wrote: heres some progress, looking good?
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/00ca58fb7b94480bd411c579 131f7d49

I'll infer that he just found out HE IS INJURED AND BLEEDING :D
If I'm right you did a really good job showing that

Everyone is looking stunning!
I was having trouble finishing my massive storyboard so I'm cutting it all into pieces and animating each part then story-boarding, I hate doing it this way but its faster for me.
Should have a good Chunk fully animated by Sunday :D
I think I'm back on track :)


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 10:10:54

I made more than 1 minute of animation, but now my pen doesnt work. I dont think ill be able to finish this. Anyways good luck.

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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 10:51:05

At 4/21/12 10:10 AM, MihaP wrote: I made more than 1 minute of animation, but now my pen doesnt work. I dont think ill be able to finish this. Anyways good luck.

When I first read this I thought it said I think I'll be able to finish it, And then I went to comment and re read it.
Damn man :( cant you cap it off wherever you are now? If not post it on the forum :C


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 10:59:34

At 4/21/12 10:51 AM, Jomillex wrote:
At 4/21/12 10:10 AM, MihaP wrote: I made more than 1 minute of animation, but now my pen doesnt work. I dont think ill be able to finish this. Anyways good luck.
When I first read this I thought it said I think I'll be able to finish it, And then I went to comment and re read it.
Damn man :( cant you cap it off wherever you are now? If not post it on the forum :C

I think I will wait till the end. Maybe I could get it fixed or ill just buy a new one, but that will take alot of time.

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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 11:14:49

At 4/21/12 10:59 AM, MihaP wrote:
At 4/21/12 10:51 AM, Jomillex wrote:
At 4/21/12 10:10 AM, MihaP wrote: I made more than 1 minute of animation, but now my pen doesnt work. I dont think ill be able to finish this. Anyways good luck.
When I first read this I thought it said I think I'll be able to finish it, And then I went to comment and re read it.
Damn man :( cant you cap it off wherever you are now? If not post it on the forum :C
I think I will wait till the end. Maybe I could get it fixed or ill just buy a new one, but that will take alot of time.

If its an intuos you can use a rubber band to hold it together same thing happened to mine when I used to have one..
Heres a pick of both held together and pulled apart.
Hopefully that's your problem or your going to get set back, But 1 minute fully animated is alot of headspace between alot of the competitors, I think? At least for me.

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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 13:11:22

Can we mention product names in our animations? I mention Miracle Whip in my entry. Is that allowed?


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 14:19:10

At 4/21/12 11:14 AM, Jomillex wrote:
At 4/21/12 10:59 AM, MihaP wrote:
At 4/21/12 10:51 AM, Jomillex wrote:
At 4/21/12 10:10 AM, MihaP wrote: I made more than 1 minute of animation, but now my pen doesnt work. I dont think ill be able to finish this. Anyways good luck.
When I first read this I thought it said I think I'll be able to finish it, And then I went to comment and re read it.
Damn man :( cant you cap it off wherever you are now? If not post it on the forum :C
I think I will wait till the end. Maybe I could get it fixed or ill just buy a new one, but that will take alot of time.
If its an intuos you can use a rubber band to hold it together same thing happened to mine when I used to have one..
Heres a pick of both held together and pulled apart.
Hopefully that's your problem or your going to get set back, But 1 minute fully animated is alot of headspace between alot of the competitors, I think? At least for me.

Thanks Josh it helped a bit:P and yea 1 min of animation because I rushed too much with script and story. Also I wont be able to animate 5 days+ I have lots of exams in may. Dont worrie you guys will catch me in a week or so:)

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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 15:08:01

At 4/21/12 02:19 PM, MihaP wrote:
Thanks Josh it helped a bit:P and yea 1 min of animation because I rushed too much with script and story. Also I wont be able to animate 5 days+ I have lots of exams in may. Dont worrie you guys will catch me in a week or so:)

Glad It helped! Also I sure hope I catch up my script is like 3 pages long and has alot of intense animation. :(
Man I wish I had that cintiq now!


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 17:10:18

Sucks cause i still havent started animation... yet script is 4 pages, all voicing is done but i have to edit it all... then start animating tonight.


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 17:44:01

At 4/21/12 05:10 PM, LazyAss23 wrote: Sucks cause i still havent started animation... yet script is 4 pages, all voicing is done but i have to edit it all... then start animating tonight.

You haven't started animating yet?! Come on david!!! GET TO WORK :O
19 days left!


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 18:10:37

Bah, I haven't done anything yet either. It's looking like work is taking to much time. I might not have a finished animation.

-Jake


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 18:56:02

I haven't done any actual animation yet either. Script, voices, animatic, they're all done. But no real animation yet.


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 19:32:09

Good so far? Any constructive criticism would be great
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/af3d25717af6a4c4cf9d83cc 0606bbe4


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 19:48:13

At 4/21/12 07:32 PM, NeroGeist wrote: Good so far? Any constructive criticism would be great
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/af3d25717af6a4c4cf9d83cc 0606bbe4

That looks fantastic!
I cant really think of anything to change about it its great :)

sorry i'm not to helpful haha.

And I'm surprised not alot of people are talking on the forum.

Sad too hear work is getting in your way Jake. :( Pull through man!

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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 20:06:54

At 4/21/12 01:11 PM, UltraEd12 wrote: Can we mention product names in our animations? I mention Miracle Whip in my entry. Is that allowed?

No, but you can think of a spoof name.


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 20:13:05

At 4/21/12 08:06 PM, NATA wrote:
At 4/21/12 01:11 PM, UltraEd12 wrote: Can we mention product names in our animations? I mention Miracle Whip in my entry. Is that allowed?
No, but you can think of a spoof name.

Magical whip, Miracle Dip, Magical Dip, Miracle Mayo. Etc, Just like I named a vacume Dykeson instead of Dyson :)


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 20:22:42

I'm only going to keep this up here for an hour, then I'm gonna remove it cause I'm secretive yet open.

but yeah, what do you guys think of what I got so far?
Also don't mind the random sketches from time to time, Its half storyboarded and some environmental stuff still needs to be added. But as it stands this is what I got. Whatchya guys think so far o:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/8481feb19b0d0e5089b874a4 3e374141


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 20:41:09

At 4/21/12 08:22 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote: I'm only going to keep this up here for an hour, then I'm gonna remove it cause I'm secretive yet open.

Holy shit this is amazing! I will post a quick shot on Monday :D

I don't have anything to be proud of yet..

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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 20:55:29

At 4/21/12 08:22 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote: but yeah, what do you guys think of what I got so far?

Looks reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaal good. Like real real good.


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 21:43:32

At 4/21/12 08:22 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote: I'm only going to keep this up here for an hour, then I'm gonna remove it cause I'm secretive yet open.

but yeah, what do you guys think of what I got so far?
Also don't mind the random sketches from time to time, Its half storyboarded and some environmental stuff still needs to be added. But as it stands this is what I got. Whatchya guys think so far o:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/8481feb19b0d0e5089b874a4 3e374141

Holy Moley man! Thats awesome! I'm amazed that you've got that much done already, especially to such a refined level. :O I feel inferior now haha
It's very atmospheric, I love the score, and the animation of the box and her hand were soooo smooth. Also thanks to the abrupt butt at the end it really made me realise how engrossing it is.
My only criticism would be that the profile shot, near the beginning, of the girl doesn't really seem as good as the other shots of her. Just the face looks slightly like a differnt design or something? i'm hving trouble explaining it properly atm ( I'm really tired, I was just about to go to bed before I saw your post. :P ) I found it slightly jarring in comparison to the rest of the shots.
But other than that this is heading in the right direction.
I'm looking forward to the finished piece!
I'll be sure to post some of my stuff soon too, once I have something a bit more substantial ;)


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 21:44:05

At 4/21/12 08:22 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/8481feb19b0d0e5089b874a4 3e374141

That is awesome.

I haven't started animating yet. Just sent the script to the voice actors. I'll probably start on the non-dialogue bits now though.


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 22:36:55

:O thanks everyone, Its revealing to know I'm not falling behind. I was starting to burn out I thought I was so far behind. <:)

At 4/21/12 09:43 PM, CatFat wrote:
At 4/21/12 08:22 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote: I'm only going to keep this up here for an hour, then I'm gonna remove it cause I'm secretive yet open.

but yeah, what do you guys think of what I got so far?
Also don't mind the random sketches from time to time, Its half storyboarded and some environmental stuff still needs to be added. But as it stands this is what I got. Whatchya guys think so far o:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/8481feb19b0d0e5089b874a4 3e374141
Holy Moley man! Thats awesome! I'm amazed that you've got that much done already, especially to such a refined level. :O I feel inferior now haha
It's very atmospheric, I love the score, and the animation of the box and her hand were soooo smooth. Also thanks to the abrupt butt at the end it really made me realise how engrossing it is.
My only criticism would be that the profile shot, near the beginning, of the girl doesn't really seem as good as the other shots of her. Just the face looks slightly like a differnt design or something? i'm hving trouble explaining it properly atm ( I'm really tired, I was just about to go to bed before I saw your post. :P ) I found it slightly jarring in comparison to the rest of the shots.
But other than that this is heading in the right direction.
I'm looking forward to the finished piece!
I'll be sure to post some of my stuff soon too, once I have something a bit more substantial ;)

n' thanks for your word or criticism! :) I agree with that side shot. I dislike that a lot I'm probably going to just reanimate. Not the best first impression to the flash.


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-21 23:44:14

At 4/21/12 10:36 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote:
O thanks everyone, Its revealing to know I'm not falling behind. I was starting to burn out I thought I was so far behind. <:)

Darnit! I missed it


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-22 00:00:58

At 4/21/12 11:44 PM, NeroGeist wrote:
At 4/21/12 10:36 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote:
O thanks everyone, Its revealing to know I'm not falling behind. I was starting to burn out I thought I was so far behind. <:)
Darnit! I missed it

Don't worry you can find it here


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-22 00:17:51

At 4/21/12 10:36 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote:
n' thanks for your word or criticism! :) I agree with that side shot. I dislike that a lot I'm probably going to just reanimate. Not the best first impression to the flash.

Cmon Dalton, don't get too crazy...


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Response to - N A T A - Open Round! 2012-04-22 01:53:16

I have 30 seconds of animation done but I'm getting distracted by Game of Thrones. fucking joffery.