At 4/21/12 08:22 PM, PoopyMcButt wrote:
I'm only going to keep this up here for an hour, then I'm gonna remove it cause I'm secretive yet open.
but yeah, what do you guys think of what I got so far?
Also don't mind the random sketches from time to time, Its half storyboarded and some environmental stuff still needs to be added. But as it stands this is what I got. Whatchya guys think so far o:
Holy Moley man! Thats awesome! I'm amazed that you've got that much done already, especially to such a refined level. :O I feel inferior now haha
It's very atmospheric, I love the score, and the animation of the box and her hand were soooo smooth. Also thanks to the abrupt butt at the end it really made me realise how engrossing it is.
My only criticism would be that the profile shot, near the beginning, of the girl doesn't really seem as good as the other shots of her. Just the face looks slightly like a differnt design or something? i'm hving trouble explaining it properly atm ( I'm really tired, I was just about to go to bed before I saw your post. :P ) I found it slightly jarring in comparison to the rest of the shots.
But other than that this is heading in the right direction.
I'm looking forward to the finished piece!
I'll be sure to post some of my stuff soon too, once I have something a bit more substantial ;)