new art any critique is needed

[thecrux]

hey whats up the crux here finally on ng hopin to share some of my work been along time since i picked up my tablet so tell me what you think of my work the points of view i get the better ill get thanks guys

[lovingthedark]

Okie dokie. Nice start, a few tips:
-anatomy wise, the wrist and the pubic bone (the bottom of her groin as you can see it) should both fall along the same axis, halfway up the body.

-The tits seem to be oriented a bit oddly, like if she was facing forward they would be pointed in asymmetric directions.

- the skull is facing us dead on, and seems like a design grabbed from somewhere else and pasted on because it isn't in perspective like everything else.

-thigh isn't long enough- normally the hands end halfway down the thigh, and the bottom of the kneecap should be a quarter of the way up the body (or three quarters down).

-what's with the floating lock of hair?

[thecrux]

At 4/15/12 01:25 AM, lovingthedark wrote: Okie dokie. Nice start, a few tips:
-anatomy wise, the wrist and the pubic bone (the bottom of her groin as you can see it) should both fall along the same axis, halfway up the body.

-The tits seem to be oriented a bit oddly, like if she was facing forward they would be pointed in asymmetric directions.

- the skull is facing us dead on, and seems like a design grabbed from somewhere else and pasted on because it isn't in perspective like everything else.

-thigh isn't long enough- normally the hands end halfway down the thigh, and the bottom of the kneecap should be a quarter of the way up the body (or three quarters down).

-what's with the floating lock of hair?

cool thank you very much dude i appreciate what you said yeah i do realize that some its off thanks for giving me such a good run down ill make sure my next piece is in greater proportion as thats kinda an area i need work in thanks again dude

[lovingthedark]

At 4/15/12 03:44 AM, thecrux wrote: thanks

No problem, glad to help.

[MaskedGuardian]

Actually, lovingthedark pretty much nailed it with everything. The only thing I'd say to also work on is the layout of the face. It's a bit messy looking, and you really want to make it look more three-dimensional.

[thecrux]

At 4/16/12 11:19 PM, MaskedGuardian wrote: Actually, lovingthedark pretty much nailed it with everything. The only thing I'd say to also work on is the layout of the face. It's a bit messy looking, and you really want to make it look more three-dimensional.

ah thanks again three dimesionality is a big hurdle as when i draw it it looks to blocky i think im geting close ill have more work up thanks again