Kinda lost motivation on this one.

[thekiwi]

Well I started a pokemon parody (damn I am original) and its going in the making for about 2,5 weeks now.
I dunno, I showed my friends and some of them didn't like the art style and the jokes.

So the question is as follows: Should I Finnish this ? I do want to but I am afraid that it doesn't get far

CLICK HERE FOR ANIMATION

Thanks for the support as always ;)

[nathanielmilburn]

Just end it with a To Be Continued so it seems intentional.

[thekiwi]

At 3/28/12 04:19 PM, nathanielmilburn wrote: Just end it with a To Be Continued so it seems intentional.

Yeah I think that's the best to do.
but im not sure I should remake this stuff all over I think in a different art style.

[nathanielmilburn]

At 3/28/12 04:22 PM, thekiwi wrote: Yeah I think that's the best to do.
but im not sure I should remake this stuff all over I think in a different art style.

If you did, i'd say keep it one style. I thought it was a bit weird you had a few real images in there and some of the Meme faces weren't drawn in the overall style (cept the bulbasaur one). If you did use more then one style, I'd keep it consistent through out.

[thekiwi]

At 3/28/12 04:28 PM, nathanielmilburn wrote:

At 3/28/12 04:22 PM, thekiwi wrote: Yeah I think that's the best to do.
but im not sure I should remake this stuff all over I think in a different art style.

If you did, i'd say keep it one style. I thought it was a bit weird you had a few real images in there and some of the Meme faces weren't drawn in the overall style (cept the bulbasaur one). If you did use more then one style, I'd keep it consistent through out.

I agree with that because a bunch of stuff looks out out place that way. I guess I'll go FBF traditional style.

[Cordyceps]

I might have found it mildly entertaining if not for the shitty memes.

[hugoroy]

It was somewhat funny, the best part was when he just ran out of the house.
The animation was amazing and very unique, though a bit underwhelming.

[somescreamokid]

I quite liked it. I think it had a unique art style to it. If you wanna use memes, then use them. It's your flash and you can do whatever YOU want to do with it.

[thekiwi]

At 4/7/12 02:52 AM, somescreamokid wrote: I quite liked it. I think it had a unique art style to it. If you wanna use memes, then use them. It's your flash and you can do whatever YOU want to do with it.

I remade it its not quite done but I gave it a more fluid look.
(its not as original in art style as the other tough)

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/bd607e94e6b6d8f2439742d4 f1328203

[Jomillex]

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/bd607e94e6b6d8f2439742d4 f1328203

Lol this is great :)

[Celshaded]

This is way better than the original, especially with the sound and voices added. I hope you finish it.

[Sacros]

At 4/9/12 07:58 PM, thekiwi wrote:

At 4/7/12 02:52 AM, somescreamokid wrote: I quite liked it. I think it had a unique art style to it. If you wanna use memes, then use them. It's your flash and you can do whatever YOU want to do with it.

I remade it its not quite done but I gave it a more fluid look.
(its not as original in art style as the other tough)

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/bd607e94e6b6d8f2439742d4 f1328203

WHOA way, way better, now THAT is more like a cartoon

congratulations, also good you didnt loose motivation on this one

i like the eyebrows ego-raptor thing like, this is going front page

[thekiwi]

WHOA way, way better, now THAT is more like a cartoon

congratulations, also good you didnt loose motivation on this one

i like the eyebrows ego-raptor thing like, this is going front page

Wow thanks :D

Getting Frontpage is a dream for me.

[Jomillex]

At 4/10/12 07:42 AM, thekiwi wrote:

WHOA way, way better, now THAT is more like a cartoon

congratulations, also good you didnt loose motivation on this one

i like the eyebrows ego-raptor thing like, this is going front page

Wow thanks :D

Getting Frontpage is a dream for me.

Well stay working and you'll be there in literally tommorow!

[dangoval95]

I remade it its not quite done but I gave it a more fluid look.
(its not as original in art style as the other tough)

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/bd607e94e6b6d8f2439742d4 f1328203

Front Page Front Page Front Page Front Page!!!!!
Dude this is awesome. Finish it please

[thekiwi]

At 4/15/12 02:20 PM, dangoval95 wrote:

I remade it its not quite done but I gave it a more fluid look.
(its not as original in art style as the other tough)

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/bd607e94e6b6d8f2439742d4 f1328203

Front Page Front Page Front Page Front Page!!!!!
Dude this is awesome. Finish it please

I will dude :D I just worked 6 hours on it (with breaks of course) coloring most of the animation.
I still need to make the backgrounds, record some voices and I am done.

[dangoval95]

I will dude :D I just worked 6 hours on it (with breaks of course) coloring most of the animation.
I still need to make the backgrounds, record some voices and I am done.

Yay can't wait...
You have motivation :3

[nuke505]

i like the animation style. and the jokes are not that bad! definantly enjoyed it

[thekiwi]

At 4/17/12 09:36 AM, nuke505 wrote: i like the animation style. and the jokes are not that bad! definantly enjoyed it

Because I just saw a pokemon red parody on the front page Im going to take a little slower and perfectionize it (is that even a word......I felt it) .

[K00lKyle]

Well- My opinion.

First off, I would of preferred the characters not being all pixel-ish. Secondly, it would have been WAY better with sound. And third off, it's not very funny, put more jokes. That brings me back to the idea of sound; if there's sounds you can bring out jokes so much better. And finally, I do think it was a little too random for my liking.

Not trying to be a jerk either, this is just what I thought.

[thekiwi]

At 4/20/12 12:13 AM, K00lKyle wrote: Well- My opinion.

First off, I would of preferred the characters not being all pixel-ish. Secondly, it would have been WAY better with sound. And third off, it's not very funny, put more jokes. That brings me back to the idea of sound; if there's sounds you can bring out jokes so much better. And finally, I do think it was a little too random for my liking.

Not trying to be a jerk either, this is just what I thought.

Thanks for your constructive input I see what you mean.

Have you seen my second link :P its totally different now (in art form). Well....its still pretty fuckin random though but that's just what I like to make, Random stuff haha.